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....and then what? Need more. Description is good, but I kind of felt like it was pointless to read this...? It definitely needs more information.

Ha. This is cool! I've never thought about making my own soundtrack. I'm impressed! Good songs, too.

I really rather liked it. It's fun to mull over. But, as far as anything else other than thought provoking goes, it's not really much. In that I mean there ...

Tomatos. And muffins. Dare I say....ew?? Haha.

I actually liked it a lot as well. However, like Clau, I have no idea what the crap it's about. But, pretty much the few flaws I've seen have been ...

I get it. But, I'm not sure if I like it. Odd? Yes. I'm probably around 50/50 on it. Other than that, until I decide if I like it, I ...

Claire-- I wasn't actually talking about the narrator cutting. The sharp edge I was speaking of pretained to the edge of the paper making a paper cut on the skin. ...

To be completely honest with you the dots got on my nerves. If you only put the dots in because it wouldn't let you put an actual indentation, then that ...

Darklight--thank you for the criticism! Let me follow up on some of your points... Art and I had gotten ourselves pregnant [...] I'm not sure if there actually is a ...

Whence, thank you for the crit! Mmm I agree with the first stanza not being the best...I had a hard time coming up with an opening that would shout because ...

I'm not entirely sure I would call this a poem. It's not bad, per se, it's just not really poetry. It's more a descriptive piece of writing. *moved to other ...

Haha no, I wrote it. But it is based off the book, or 'inspired' rather, I suppose. Thank you.

Haha awesome. It wasn't quite as hilarious as some of your other works, but it is funny just the same! :D

I loveth it.

Yea, I'm not a haiku person. But, I've expressed that several times in the past few days so I won't go into the details haha. And haiku's are characteristic of ...