Venonymous

Here is what I think about this poem: I think it was too straight forward that it turned into someone begging for something. I know you're trying to convey your ...

This poem is very enjoyable to read. And yet it's already been, one... two... wait, three days in the green room?! You got to be kidding me. I liked the ...

I like these types of poems the most. Short but meaningful. And yours were both short and meaningful. It's like getting a full-house on poker. Or is this a haiku? ...

I like the idea, it's original and creative, the formatting and the backwards idea was great (or maybe there was already something like this and I'm just ignorant). But the ...

I like the idea of the poem. But I think you can replace/remove a few words to make the poem flow. To be honest, it was a bit boring to ...

Woah, this is really enjoyable to read. Really enjoyable. This is the poem you made during the workshop, right? People are posting their poems from the workshop are tempting me ...

In my opinion I think you can replace the "knock, knock, knock" and "boom, boom, boom" sounds with something else. Because the repetition seems forced, although it those make the ...

I enjoyed reading this poem. But If I had a suggestion it would be about losing the punctuation, like bumpeh said below. It somehow interrupted the flow while reading it. ...

I had time to decipher the meaning hiding behind this poem, but I think I got it wrong so I'll just leave it to myself. I loved the use of ...

I enjoyed reading this poem, really. But I keep thinking about what's the message behind this. Or is it just about madness? Because the lines really catch my curiosity, like ...

You see, poems are one way to convey your emotions, and I can see yours here. My suggestion is adding some metaphors or imagery to make it more beautiful and ...

I liked how you used a cigarette to tell about how she was using her credit card. If not the fire burning her could the nicotine kill her just like ...