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hey Audy. I really loved your work.You have this uncanny knack of placing the exact image into the readers mind with your words. There was this melancholic image running in ...

Hey rainn! I read through this like a couple of times. I'm still Lost:) Guess, this one is targeted towards the so called higher intellects. Does it have some inner ...

Hey!! I find this very visually active, this one gets the reader visualising things as he reads through it. But u kept wandering here and there making it difficult for ...

Hey bubbles. A scary and neatly written thought. It was beautiful how you brought all the inanimate objects to life in the beginning. And I love the transition you made ...

Very different and thoughtful. Could feel the indifference initially which changed more into guilt at the later stages. Had a good rhyme scheme to it. Liked the way how you ...

You nailed it. A perfect smooth follow up from one stance to another. As a reader I felt myself travel along with your poem. The end was apt and kept ...

I liked it. Even though I'm not a big fan of stories which involve magical elements, you made it sound as humanly as possible. The whole set where she is ...

Good work. I read it like twice thinking I had missed out something. Well to me it was a bit shallow. You could have brought up ,few more emotions. Covered ...

Well that was romantic and simple. I guess, You covered all what a girl dreams of. My favourite lines were "he does not know that I would run . That ...

You got me right at the was, to the point and smooth. The way you describe the scene and the thoughts of your character gives a very clear image for ...

A clean straight forward thought, where you managed to get it right into the reader. I like the way how u dint bother much on the rhyme scheme and concentrated ...