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@ Alliaaryn, THANK YOU. I was so flustered trying to put breaks and parting chapters that I made stupid mistakes, haha. Thanks for catching that =]

Bahaha =] This was lovely. Poor Nate, he Is pretty rad.

Ooh, I liked this. Descent emotional depth, great use of vocabulary. I would change the set up just a weensy bit, it's a little bit to choppy and makes th ...

@anonymousanarchist, thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoy it =]]]

@ Dudette, you're a life saver! You have no idea how much you helped me =] Thanks again!

Hello there =]. First I would like to say that this was a nice read, flowed pretty well, though other spots were a bit patchy. But overall a very nice, ...

I would have to agree with both previous reviewers, Rooh found some mistakes that need to be fixed, to make it flow better and not distract the reader. A lovely ...

This made me laugh, we learned about this stuff not too long ago =]. But anyway, it flowed nicely and I think most of your information is correct. I'm a ...

I can totally relate to this piece! The piece was short, and to the point, with no fluff. I enjoyed it however short it may have been =]

Well then. Um. I'm not sure what to say to this. But I agree with the previous reviewer. Anticipation has begun.

Ah! I can totally see this in a mag of sorts, a sweet little poem with a picture of this girl with her hair in shambles and an 'urg my ...

Oh the irony of it all! I was just feeling this way right before I read this. What a pick me up =] This made me laugh. A lot. Cute ...

Woah. Ha ha =] Very ominous beginning. Hope to read more into the plot and all once you have a bit more posted =]

This was positively epic =]. If only all schools put these kinds of assignments to work. Learning would be modern and easy to relate to. =] This was well played ...

Thanks Butterfinger! I thought that I was right, I looked it up twice. Ha ha =] Thank you!