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I don't usually read a lot of poems, or songs, whatever you call this.
But i would have to say this is a really great poem.
Don't stop.
Oh the irony of it all! I was just feeling this way right before I read this. What a pick me up =] This made me laugh. A lot. Cute and funny and just awesome =]
Haha! This little piece made my day. The way you imply the quirkiness of when you're bored and how you're desperate for something to do... well you nailed it perfectly. I just don't see anything wrong with it, except maybe that the directions make it loose some of it's flow. Insted of intsructing them where to read you should just repeat, add repeats of the stanzas beneath in the right order that way we don't have to stop reading and go up and down, or stay there.
Hope it helped some,
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