Published May 21, 2011
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After I read this I had to laugh!!! Hilarious. Made my day
It's not a poem, but it's really quite funny.
Well then. Um. I'm not sure what to say to this. But I agree with the previous reviewer. Anticipation has begun.
O.O
I was just about to give a review when I realized that you've only written a repetition of the word or sound .. Tick, Tick , Tick.
Hmm, it may not say much but it does give an odd sense of apprehension and anticipation.