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  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Icy Volcano (acrostic)

    Hello! I've came to review your poem! Lets get started :) I really love this poem! I don't know much about acrostic poems so if I get something wrong I ...

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: ​A Pack of Wolves Serenades a Cloudy Sky

    Hello! I've came to review your poem! I really love the theming of this! I really love how simplistic, detailed, and well written this is! I really love how you ...

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: a.c.a.b.

    This poem is extremely heartbreaking but in a extremely good way!! Its extremely realistic as we really feel the pain of the author writing this as they realized how POC ...

    Aug 1, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: houseguests

    Your poem here is so unique and interesting! I love the symbolism of anxiety and paranoia being compared to house objects like paintings, walls, etc. I love how well we ...

    Aug 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Christian Girls

    I really love this poem! It has such a strong punch with great symbolism that's easy to understand yet is deep and poetic in its commentary about Christianity and its ...

    Aug 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: sweet brokenness

    Hello! I have come to review your poem today. Before I get into the review, I am very sorry for what you have gone through with the topics mentioned in ...

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Literature Re: you're my toxic plastic

    Hello! I have come to review your first poem on YWS! Welcome to YWS and I hope you enjoy it here! I think in my opinion, this poem has a ...

    May 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Feeling free to write.

    Hello I have came to review your poem today! This poem is rather short so my review shall be shorter: This Is a very lovely poem! I absolutely love your ...

    May 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: .

    Hello! I have come to review your poem today! This poem is so realistic and very simple but yet conveys a very powerful message of being kind towards a stranger. ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Demons— A poem

    Hello! I have come to review your poem today! I must say, this is a very charming and lovely poem! I want to get into it! This poem is very ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: only fragments

    Hello! I have come to review your poem! Once again it's another one of your poems! and I must say you have some talent! This review will be shorter since ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: on and on

    Hello! I have come to review your poem today! I really love so many things about this poem so I really want to get into this! I really love the ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Diary of a Soul: Day 1

    Hello! I have come to review this lovely poem today! This poem is very beautiful and almost dreamy in a way that takes of seasons changing and routines! It's interesting ...

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: They Are Coming

    Hello! I have come to review your poem today! I absolutely love how creepy and dark this poem is! It gives off a silly yet creepy Halloween vibe that isn't ...

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Blood Heist

    Hello! I have come here to review your poem today! I absolutely love this poem! I love the chaos, emotionally charged language, and all the descriptive verbs and adjectives you ...

    Apr 17, 2020


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