ToritheMonster

Hi there! So, maybe it's because I've never read your story, but this poem just didn't do much for me. It felt like something I would read in a WoW ...

Hai Lava! So, I liked this poem. Right off the bat; might I just suggest not breaking it up with asterisks? I don't think this poem is gaining anything from ...

Well hi there! Usually I'd have a nitpick quote here, but this was very clean. I'll give you my impressions first. Well, this is certainly shocking to read! Usually you ...

Darling; most hardcore Phantom fans are mildly goth theatre people. This automatically makes them all masochists. Dark, creepy, and incredibly complex villains trump the cute blond hero every time. On

Well howdy! I see you've written yerself a poem. Let's review, as I read it. Today I cried I sank down to my knees Gasped for air And sobbed Not ...

Hi there! I'm not into religious-type poems, but this was well-written, and I actually liked it. Here's the mistakes you should fix in red : SIN In every soul there ...

Hi there! So, this poem doesn't really strike me as anything amazing. Firstly, I can't tell what it's about. Who is 'they'? Is this poem about fighting or something? You ...

Hi there! So, I haven't read the other parts of this, but I'll do my best to review. First: I'm a huge comic buff, so I'm a tad confused. Is ...

Hi there! I like this poem, actually. I'm usually not a fan of love poems. Overall, this is cute. I actually think you really captured the feeling of leaving someone ...

Hi there! So, I'm not a huge fanfic person except for the occasional Harry Potter, but I decided to review this. First! Please space out those huge blocks of text. ...

Hi there! So, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so I would typically give you a grammar/spelling review. But this seems pretty well edited to me! I'll give ...

Hi there! So, as someone who recently lost an incredibly special pet, this story really rang true. I know what it's like to have an animal dying at the vet's ...

Hi! So, I'm not big on romance, but this was actually pretty good! You write eloquently, with beautiful imagery and descriptions. This rang with emotion and feeling. It was a ...

Hi there! I liked this poem. It had a sweet simplicity to it- most people write poems about how they ll never find love, how it never exists. I tinge ...

Hi there! So, I'm not going to give this a super nitpicky review, as this doesn't seem like it needs one. You don't have very many basic errors. However, I ...