TinyDancer

This poem is so beautiful! I loved all the sound in it. This piece is a symphony of words and emotion and actual music. I just have a few words ...

Ooh I like this so much! Your simile is so powerful and in just two lines you managed to pack a huge punch. I would suggest though, putting a period ...

Hey there! This poem has a great concept, but as the previous reviewer stated, it has a few weak spots that I want to offer some help with. I don't ...

Hey there, sorry this took so long! Let me first say that you have very beautiful language. The only thing I could find wrong with this is that the middle ...

Okay, so this piece has A TON of cliche ideas and words and phrases. However, I think it mostly worked. I'd take a few out just because poetry should taste ...

Hey there, this piece is really beautiful! It's so touching and I can really feel the emotion you put into it. I love the imagery and comparing a person to ...

Hi there, I think you should classify this as poetry! A very wise professor once told me that "poetry is when the writer decides when the line ends" and you ...

Hi :) This poem was good. I usually don't lke the whole dread and darkness thing but this was actually different than I thought it was going to be, which ...

Hey :) This poem is so beautiful. Your descriptions are fluid and silky and you have really great breaks and transitions. I'm on the fence about the ending though. Like ...

Hey there :) This is definitely an interesting work. I love how long your lines are and your thoughts are so elaborately presented. It's a great breath of fresh air ...

Hey there! Really strong poem here. I mean wow, this is powerful. I really liked how agressive it was in the center as that balanced the nice image of a ...

Hey there, This poem is really beautiful. I especially liked the lines "Ever evolving compliments, but seemingly meek atmospheres sliding through my window panes." To me, the poem has come ...

Hi there! This piece is so intimately crafted, and very sweet to read. It gives the reader a precious little glimpse into the personal lives of these two people. It ...

Hey there :) It's been a while, but I'm back! Now, about this piece: I agree with Pilot. This is too short! I want to see more! I must've read ...

This is so simple and sweet with an air of underlying passion that I loved. Your tone and voice is quite natural (not forced like in some poetry I've read, ...