TimmyJake

Ok. Timmyjake here to give you a review. For a short story, you move along REALLY quickly. It almost seems more like an essay than a short story. I see ...

Alright! This is my first review as a squire of the Green Room. Ten more to go and then I become a knight! This is Timmyjake. I am not as ...

Hello missingpiece. You are about as new as I am! I am not as experienced as others, but I will try to give you a good review. Firstly, you are ...

Timmyjake here to give you a review! Yay! Its a first chapter! I have been told that it is hard to give a review to someone on content if you ...

Yes. I know many people who had those things happen to them. Some think that its funny, while the truth is much worse. Timmyjake here to give you a review. ...

Oh, wow. Timmyjake here to give you a review. Once again I am drawn into your story! It starts suddenly and ends suddenly, with nothing but nightmaeres inbetween. You story ...

Timmyjake here to give you a review!! Ivan seems to be a very nervous and fearful character. Perfect if you want to keep your reader nervous for him! One thing ...

I like this chapter, too! Timmyjake here to give you a review of sorts! First I want to compliment you on how you space everything and make sure that the ...

Secretejournalist, you are the rock star of poems!! How many have you written? Timmyjake here representing the apple dumpling team. We rock, don't we? Oh, I probably shouldn't ask you ...

What a poem! Timmyjake here! Firefox won't let us go! More reviews. more reviews. The taskmaster of the dumplings, I am afraid. Anyway, on to the poem! It seems to ...

Timmyjake here! I told everyone that my last review was an hour ago, but I had to come on to see how my team was doing! I am telling you, ...

Timmyjake here to give you my last review of the day... Oh, you should feel so honored!! :P The concept of your poem is great to me. A marriage, a ...

Timmyjake here to give you a review! The Percy Jackson books are some of my favorites!! Very well done essay. I like how you add in exerpts from the book. ...

Hello, Narcissus! Oh, wait, its Nanya. Timmyjake here to give you a review! I like the peom and how it flows. The poem is sad, telling of her hardships in ...

What a great poem! Timmyjake here to give you a short review! Firstly, I will just look at punctuation and grammar. I is never capitalized in the poem and always ...