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Re: I miss you
Timmy here for a quick review! So how I review is this way: First you see my... Nitpicks That made the butterflies burst flutter into my tummy That line is ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: The Gun
Timmy here for a quick review! Ok, so I am going to just comment on this poem, and then point out a few nitpicks when I finish with that. This ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: Keeper of the Flames 1.2
Timmy here for a quick review! Sorry, this one might be a tad short... I only have a few minutes. :( Soooo... onto your review! You already know my style ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: The Cost of Living
Timmy here for a quick review!! Wow, what a great beginning. You don't spare your characters any time to relax! Just throw them in, first off. I like that. It ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 2
Timmy here for a review! I hope you don't mind me following your book as you write it! I am getting really into it as you go! :D So I ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Don't fall
Timmy here for a quick(sorta quick, anyway) review! I know that your computer just got unplugged... (terrible sad fate, I know) So perhaps leaving a review will put a smile ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Stainless Steel
Timmy here for a quick review!! :D So I have a new review style going here. Its a little rusty, still in the works, but hopefully a few more reviews ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Keeper of the Flames 1.1
Timmy here for a review! I was looking around YWS and I saw your name... And remembered that while you have reviewed many of my works, I have never done ...
Feb 7, 2014 -
Re: i miss you
Timmy here for a quick review!! When I see anything that you wrote, I have to like and review it! Its always so awesome! This one was no exception. Beautiful ...
Feb 7, 2014 -
Re: Today we say goodbye
Timmy here for a quick review!! This is a very sad poem, but at the same time it has a ring of hope inside its flowing words. This was beautiful, ...
Feb 7, 2014 -
Re: Roger & Diana
Timmy here for a quick review! I am going to tell you that this is the most original and unique piece I have ever seen on YWS, and if you ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Nobody Sees
Timmy here for a quick review!! For most poetry, I would say CUT THE LENGTH!! But with this one? The length is perfect! I love the story you write here, ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: With Death Comes Questions
Timmy here for a short review! Ok, so this was really cool. I love how you describe everything... If you worked on this a little and broke it up into ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: My Mind
Timmy here for a quiiicccckkkkk review... I mean, how can you write a long review on a piece so short? But that is a Haiku. Short and to the point. ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 1
Timmy here for a quick review! Oh my gosh, this is so perfect! The pacing is so wonderful, and everything is so vivid. Your imagery is so amazing. Its like ...
Feb 4, 2014