TimelessMage

First things first! Welcome, newcomer. Welcome to the wonderful and crazy world of poetry, where anything goes, where we can create whole worlds in stanzas, and destroy norms in a ...

Hello! Timeless Mage here with a review! General Impressions/the gist of the poem The speaker, (whom I am going to assume is female) got stabbed in the back by her ...

Hey there! Timeless Mage here with a review! I really like how this conveys the random train of thought that you get when you can't think of anything- like grasping ...

Hey there, Timeless Mage here with another review! Overall, this is a fantastic piece! I usually try to find something that needs work in works, and the only think that ...

Hey there! Timeless Mage here to leave a review. This is a lovely short story. I always enjoy it when stories get to smudge the edges of reality like this ...

Hi, Timeless Mage here to leave a review! First thoughts and impressions: I enjoyed reading this! It reads very much like a love letter from the sun to the moon, ...

Hey there! Here to leave a review. Sleepwalking to my demise The line breaks make this feel very choppy, which makes it very hard to read, almost like the speaker ...

I like this, It really speaks to the intense belief that outside validation is what we need, only to find that it really, truly, sounds fake. The intense longing of ...

This is great! The repetition of stanzas made this a really enjoyable read. I didn't understand why you repeated the stanzas until I thought about Ouroboros. The stanza "the serpent ...

Hey there! I really liked that you followed a rhyme scheme. Not many people (Unfortunately, even myself) use one when writing poetry in more free-form or simple stanzas. I also ...

This is a great descriptive piece. The only thing bad about it is the choppiness of the sentences. Overall, it's pretty good for variety of language, and the words you ...

I love this! A few critiques though: First off, the last line, "Did you stand with Sadoria, or with its enemies will you fall" has a very confusing tense change, ...

I love this piece, especially the last line "and every writers suffer from different war". Overall, I would say that this piece is still in its design stages. Things like ...