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Re: Syboleth ch. 16: Valerie, 2032
…Another time jump? Let’s see how you justify going back 2 yrs which is still 1 yr forward from the beginning narrative. I really like that Val had this friend ...
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Re: the final act
Well, I too am not a poet XD So maybe this works out for the both of us? First of all: I love the rhythm. I love how I can ...
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Re: The Depth Of Elusive Truth In Lies Of life and Love In Depression In Methaphor.
I feel like a broken record, but I do like to visit the other reviewers portfolio to look at their works—even if poetry usually goes straight over my head! :3 ...
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Re: Grade 5.
Aww don’t poison the well with your summary =D Let the work speak for itself! Although… Uh poetry is not really my strong forte, I saw all the reviews you’re ...
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Re: Syboleth ch. 14: Pleas
Ah, we are back to familiar ground. It’s a relief to have a relatable character after the last chapter. Hmm looks like Charlie at least considers Garrett a “friend”. And ...
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Re: An ordinary encounter
I like that you mention how rain on umbrellas can be a soothing sound :3 Hmm are you aware of how to do Dialogue Formatting properly? If not, I suggest ...
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Re: Marcus Cochran meets Ruth Walsh
Hmm and another one! I wonder about the word choice here “he had been given less work than Marcus“ and then I wrote that sentence and now I am no ...
Apr 17 -
Re: Clown and Killer’s daughter
Hia, it’s me again. XD Do you know that 35% of all my reviews here have been for your works! And then they are still kinda underrepresented, given the composition ...
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Re: don't light a wet cigarette - prologue
Appreciate the warnings ~ Hia! I find myself with a bit of time on my hands and figured I should look at all the cool stuff the prolific April reviewers ...
Apr 17 -
Re: Queen of Hollow Night
Hia, this has been sitting in the GR for a while so let me look at it. It's kinda what I do. Since the work is really long, I'll give ...
Apr 17 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 12: [spoiler title]
And one more chapter =D I appreciate you putting the chapter title in spoilers. Tho not sure why yet. Okay reading on a bit more… I’m not even sure if ...
Apr 17 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 11: Clipped, First Half
Okay I am a tad worried that this means this is only half the chapter and I cannot find the next one XD (But then I remembered that you link ...
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Re: The Lady Who Carries A Torch (By Jasmine)
Ah so I was wrong last poem. I guess this is a much more positive interpretation, all things considered (curse, Digimon brain! XD) But also, it’s a much much higher ...
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Re: Breath of the Wild (By Lavender)
It is impossible not to think of the Zelda game when reading that title. Hi Rebel! Extra review today because I felt like it. Also because of the title. I ...
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Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)
Ah Jasmine =D Love the first line already. I also like how she’s a) screaming the title and b) that first line! I also really really like people that honestly ...
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