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Re: the daydreams of a fish (when i open my eyes, all i see is the sky)
Good morning canopy! As per usual, lots of likes, no reviews, so here I am. I like the title. I guess, the way fish sleep, they would see the surface ...
Jul 9 -
Re: He doesn’t understand, does he?
Oh I at least like the self-awareness Tim display here, saying that all the things he does for protection are actually really scary to normal people. Oh I feel for ...
Jul 8 -
Re: You should come on over, it’s fun! [Kyle’s POV]
Ahh I recently read the other POV, I think? So let’s see if this can provide any new insights. Idk why but the narration here, despite calling things “heavy” between ...
Jul 8 -
Re: It Was Held
Alrighty, let’s find out what was held! Already, I like the sentiment expressed in the first stanza. That just because something is over, unwilling, it doesn’t mean it didn’t leave ...
Jul 8 -
Re: Between Us, One Hundred
Ohh like basically fanfic, but for a song! I really like the first paragraph. I forgot the exact rhythm of the song but it was easy to read one into ...
Jul 8 -
Re: A Happening
Good morning :3 I think the first few verses of your poem read very well! I like how you establish the base line so efficiently! But what really caught my ...
Jul 8 -
Re: Dear worst bestfriend
Heya Alex! I somehow missed that this was your poem, still in the Green Room. And idk… Something about the way you described it and maybe also even the cover ...
Jul 8 -
Re: The Price of Love
Oh that is already a pretty cool starting line for your poem! I like how you immediately immerse us into the feeling of what it’s like to be a child ...
Jul 8 -
Re: My Gods
Hmm! I see an interesting format to your poem already! I do wonder what it means so let’s read it ~ Oh no, this feels as if something physical, something ...
Jul 8 -
Re: Chapter Thirteen: Two cursed young girls (Part One) (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) (A call from the other side)
Good morning ^^ I am so curious why Nina has no comment on the fact that Alyssa is wearing a nightgown XD Oh I like how poetic this sounds: a ...
Jul 8 -
Re: Jeff calls Randy
And one more review for today 😊 Ah okay, I didn’t expect to read of Jeff and Liu so soon again! Hang out? That sounded fun, but a little too ...
Jul 7 -
Re: Lazari thinks on it
Okay, this is the next in line after Sam found Sally last chapter, right? I wish you would have added more details on how Sam escaped Lazari, at least what ...
Jul 7 -
Re: Raisa’s diary entry (5/18/1955)
Hello Raisa 😊 I haven’t read anything from your diary in a while so~ I do like the diary style of storytelling. Because on some days, just very little happens ...
Jul 7 -
Re: It’s a shame, isn’t it? :(
Had a pretty busy morning so my reviews are a bit late. But here we go :3 I remember the first part of this story well (not least bc I ...
Jul 7 -
Re: 🩷🎪💄 The spiraling polka-dotted path of a clown: Chapters 7-8 🩷🎪💄
I am so confused. I was sure I read this but no, there are no reason for this one. Let’s immediately rectify that error on my part! Hmm I do ...
Jul 6
