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Re: A little friend
Last time: Against better judgement, our two MCs left for the outside despite the train coming soon… Now, where will the snippets take us this time? *reads first few sentences* ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Inner clown
Not Janice, but Emma, gotcha :3 I love these lines: Friends, they fall But makeup stays on It really shows where her priorities are! Same for these btw: You’re a ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Five miserable Richardson stories
Alright, hand it to me, the miserable time 😊 I am ready ! “Most people don’t see me. Some do, though. Some people see me. I lock eyes with them ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Cyprian’s story
Wanted to read the other related story too so here I am ^^ I have 0 connection to Veterans Day so my opinion is: you might as well use it ...
Jun 11 -
Re: Wanette’s story
Good morning ^^ I was wondering where this would be going since the beginning was a little slow and then you hit me with this: “The world was full of ...
Jun 11 -
Re: Desmaire Parrish’s origin
Hia!! Went ahead and looked at the gacha designs and I just love Frederick’s clown outfit and hair~ Onward to the story! I have a vague memory of Lucille being ...
Jun 10 -
Re: Raven’s origin: Souls and Roses 🫧🫀
Ah I had a bit of a déjà-vû! But ofc this is the kid’s perspective after I read the parents’ perspective a little while ago! I feel like the slower ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Morning breakfast
So curious in fact that I read the other story right after! I do feel like you could have had a tiny reminder what kinda letter she talked abt, just ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Letter for Poppy
Heya~ After the few Poppy side stories, back to Poppy-for-real XD I also find her having a mirror she can look at first thing in the morning a cool character ...
Jun 9 -
Re: When Shadows Ring- Chapter 3
Morning Laylay~ I’m jumping in at ch3 so let’s see what you have in store for us ^^ I like how the first paragraph is dripping with personality :3 (Also ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 3, An Interesting Boy)
Good morning! Love that you included links to your other chapters ^^ I think I have come up with another writing tip that might benefit you: try to combine dialogue ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Secret
Am in a bit of a poet-y mood so hi Witch Aet~ Before reading this, I would like you to know that every time I saw this on my spreadsheet, ...
Jun 8 -
Re: Alyssa’s desires
Heya~ Oha that is a surprisingly dark thing to read (yes, yes usually your stories are creepy and well-deserving of the horror genre) but mannn a comment like this: “so ...
Jun 8 -
Re: The girl and the monster: Chapter 2
And Number 2, right after ^^ I know I know, it says hiatus but hey, maybe it’ll spark some imagination. Or a second lamp for attracting the moths away from ...
Jun 8 -
Re: The girl and the monster: Chapter 1
Hello friend~ I am already in love with the black birds that speak so easily with a monster~ I also like how knowledgeable the monster is but that it still ...
Jun 8
