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Re: Hunter x Hunted? [Ch. XIX, Nine]
Ah, the quote of the day~ I did miss those =D Hia Rebel! Time for me to read more Nine huh, it has been mentioned often enough in April XD ...
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Re: Jay watches the blood spill
I know I know, it is free to watch… but I seem to never find the time to watch anything but Starcraft Videos while I eat my lunch @.@ So ...
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Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Four; Rewrite history
Gooood morning!! As promised, ch4! ….this reads a lot like a first draft. Like… from the typos, missing commas and the somewhat stilted flow of their dialogue… I have trouble ...
Jun 28 -
Re: Asher’s origin-The Laurence family’s deepest woes
And a bit more of Asher 😊 I do like how you structured this and that you mention all the major players. I feel like Asher would have been a ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Helen Parrish’s origin
Hia again today. I tried reading this yesterday and idk why but I couldn’t concentrate. So let’s try this again! Ok and that is a sinister sentence to read: “Another ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Chapter 30 - Sange
Well then, you didn’t answer my PM but your work still remains in the Green Room so let’s look at this context-less pre-climax you have here 😊 I already like ...
Jun 27 -
Re: The Killing Goes with the 3; little Knife
Ok came here in search of clarity. The confusion continues but I do like the dialogue in the first paragraph (even if it is still hard to follow!) I also ...
Jun 27 -
Re: The Killing Goes With The 3; Me, Mine, and Ours.
So this has been in the Green Room for a while and I’m kinda sure I am not the intended audience… but there’s nothing wrong with looking at the writing ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Two cursed young girls: Part One [Nina Alexandria Hopkins] [Chapter Twelve: An invite from a friend]
I figured it out! I read the title wrong! Chapter 12 here I come! Alright if this is the direct continuation… Is the stuff that Jeff pointed out last night ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Jason makes a special thing!
I am confusion. I’m trying to find Chapter 11 Part 2 but there is only Chapter 12 Part 1 so…what is going on and now I ended up here so ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Two cursed young girls: Part One (Chapter Eleven: A sleep like Hell) [Nina Alexandria Hopkins]
And one more for good measure~ For a sec I confused this series with Emberlyn and Juniper but no, this is Nina! (Confusion on my part not any of your ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Just a fangirl
Okay I am already intrigued by the the A/N here. She’s a fangirl and she’s asking her “idol” to give back her friend, so he took her friend and she ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Jeff’s little gift
Morning! I feel like starting with a long repetition of “piece of paper” might not be the best for this one? 😊 Hmm you might have wanted a different way ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Three; Deafening silence
Good morning lady, Hmmm from the summary I kinda expected a bigger description and reaction from James about the screech. Some pain and more? Okay… I feel like you don’t ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 19
I see, LMS is treating you well? Let’s see what this new chapter brings :3 Ok and the first two sentences start with “Sera” … Might have wanted to do ...
Jun 26
