Tikaya

I like how it’s painfully obvious that our MC isn’t used to doing battle with magic. All the little things, questioning herself, trying and failing to do something she knows ...

I really like this sentence: the days had stretched on like the flow of a river, undisturbed, everything moving as it was meant to be. That said, can you really ...

Ok last one for today (I mutter to myself like a mantra) I was a bit confused if this is supposed to be sung or just dialogue. It feels too ...

Ah first thought abt this is actually that you could make your sentences a bit shorter 😊 Especially the explanation about the Starlit Angels feels too dense for just a ...

Hi hello, found your story in this Green Room and decided to drop a review :) I really like the first paragraph already sets the tone! I'm wondering if it's ...

Strange to review something that has just come out but here we go! I really liked your poem and for once I immediately understood what it's all about even if ...

Alright an Alyssa story, let’s go. I like how she’s talking abt how LJ is just misunderstood. It fits right in with her character! I also find it v interesting ...

Oh poor, poor Aeliana… She doesn’t see just how twisted all this is. I especially like the description of how the murdered children show up. Shivers! And LJ sounds almost ...

Oh this is the context for the story where she accidentally burns the village down? [read further on and realise that might a different story that I also read. The ...

Well creeper you made it possible. I have stopped fearing A/N’s and started reading yours for context 😊 And right of the bat it’s sad to hear that Poppy didn’t ...

Alright, hi cats and here goes 😊 I appreciate the person list at the beginning ^^ My first thought is that you could work a little on your paragraphing. Each ...

Ohh I like that there are some consequences immediately to what the dad brought home! At the same time, I’m a bit confused why everyone is panicking and the brother ...

Hi hello! Let me head straight into the review. Here: This sentence feels quite disjointed without context “Dick came at the door.”, it’s just sitting in between the dialogue and ...

Oh I really like your writing style. It’s very immersive and I quite enjoyed all the descriptions! Just a head’s up about dialogue formatting. Teren paused, grimacing . “Audrey[…]” . ...

Ahh another Asher story. I liked the last one and the mystical feel to it! I really feel for this poor guy. He always struck me as someone who tries ...