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Re: Rearview Mirror
Hey!! Here to review!! XP So, I really like the capitalization and errors there. I see that you made every line begin with a capital. Also, had you noticed that ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: The hospital
Hey!! So, I am really looking forward to the horror part!! Not many things do scare me or give me a true sense of fright. Maybe this piece will! In ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Acupuncture
Hey! So, first before anything else...*clicks the 'like' button*! O.k., your topic was really interesting and poem, down to the point. Your topic was one I would probably never think ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: funny as it is
Hey! So, I can find no spelling or grammatical mistakes. Great job in that category! This is very realistic and this is what I love. Although, it does not apply ...
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: Good, evil? Human.
Heyy!! So, the title called me innnnn and so did the beginning sentence!! I love the very fact that it rhymes and makes sense. I also love the fact that ...
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: Crucify Me.
Heyy!! So, Collideascope! How you been? Anyway, here to review! Well, I've actually read this about two or three times. I have no bad things to say! Only that if ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: The lonely pup meets a cat
Hey!! So, I love the names and the description in the whole piece! Great job! P.s. The title dragged me in! Great job on that! But, sad to say, I ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Is different really that bad,or is it just different
Hey!! I love the title!! It drew me in!! Just a few nitpicks, though! So, in the second line, I think the whole thing would sound better and flow more ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Transgender Day of Remembrance
Hi!! So, I am not transgender or know anyone personally who is. But, nonetheless, I do understand that there are people who are. But, they are still people too! I ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Rap of The River: Timelessness.
Hey!! Before I start, I just wanted to say, I feel ya! And, if they do read it, they just say it's great! Like, I'm looking for a criticism not ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Catching Polka Dots (Pantoum)
Hey! Here to review! P.S. WOOOOWW! How did you write this in all its perfectionality!? So, lemme be serious for a minute or so. What gave you the idea to ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: the boy who tasted fear
Hey, HS! Here to review! So, I really love this! But there are some minor spelling/grammatical mistakes that are common. 1. In the first line, there should be a capital. ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Smile(y) Please!
Wow, DFG! This ccrraacckkeedd me uupp!! I will surely read it anytime I - well - basically anytime! Don't forget the addict *ahem SnazzyPencil ahem*. I never realized how - ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Rap of the River: Boy Toy time.
Hey! Here to review! So, I did wonder at firssttt... But, then I read the rest. I smiled for so much of it! It is hilarious. Also, you don't need ...
Nov 8, 2014 -
Re: People ask...
This is true. If you have never felt depression, you will never know what it is truly like to be depressed. The 2nd paragraph...boy!...I had to look away with tears ...
Nov 7, 2014
