Threnody

Very nice poem! Is it based on the Greek Myth? I like it. It illustrates a very clear message. Just a few corrections- He wants to escape, From his prison ...

Nice job. Mostly flowing, very set rhyme scheme, looks like you did pretty thorough research, and nice transitions. Unlike most poems, you didn't leave any empty spaces. Just a few ...

Wonderful job with this. 5 minutes? It usually takes me half and hour to even come up with an idea! I loved this and you should be proud of it! ...

Overall I thought this was a great prologue. It made me really want to read more! I loved the concept and the way it lead to the problem. Only a ...

Oh wow. This was so full of emotion! I loved it! It flowed very nicely and had a deep thoughtful meaning. Just a few nitpicks; Your sweet carries Umm. What ...

Very interesting. I like it. It was filled with a lot of emotion. I just fixed some punctuation~ I’m sitting in a plain white room , Filled with all my ...

This was an awesome poem! I have had similar issues with shots, but not as bad as blacking out. This was really fun to read! Here's a few of my ...

HI Ducati! I loved this poem a lot. It was really nice. It seems as though everyone else caught your mistakes. I am just here to say how much I ...

This was a very heart felt poem. I loved it because I share similar memories. My cat had to be put down. She was 18 years old. I loved her ...

Beautiful. Such eloquence is almost non-existing. I loved it. I was tired of searching through poems looking for a poem that's half as amazing as this one. I only have ...

This was an amazing piece of work. I loved it. I can't wait to read more. I just made a few changes in bold~ The snow blazed around the hospital ...

I absolutely loved this poem! Running out of hot chocolate almost made me cry. It was so sad. I loved your metaphors and your rich description! One thing you could ...

I think that it was interesting. It could have, possibly at the end gave a bigger hint to what it was in case the reader didn't quite get it. I ...

Sorry jophrey but I'm just no good at reviewing this long stuff. My area is poetry, but I'll give it a shot. I loved the plot. Some stories like this ...

Very interesting. I liked it. But I think you need to describe your eye a little more. I really couldn't get the concept of you eye working against you. Did ...