TheWorldIsMyLife

Hi :3 Becca here, I really enjoyed your piece. I found it relatable and, while dramatic in nature, is essentially feelings many girls experience at some point so I liked ...

Hello :) I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I apologise as I'm not the best at reviewing. However, I loved the concept of the poem and thought it was very gripping. ...

Hey there Saterdays. Let's start off with telling you this is a great poem. If you put this into stanzas then it could really improve this though. The words theirself ...

Hey there Story Weaver! I will go into (some sort of) detail about each paragraph. It’s morning, and the sun’s still trembling over the horizon. My favourite line of the ...

Hey there Book Lover! I'm just going to put stuff down as I read through it. 1. Your speech is difficult to read. Try separating it by pressing the carriage ...

Hey there Cadi! I really like this story. I was instantly intrigued by the title. So to start, the good things (of which there are a lot). 1. The title, ...

Hey there nomadpenguin. I really like this poem, it's funny. I was laughing a while, haha. I once heard a poet say that the pen is a living creature The ...

On first read, I was thinking "how am I meant to review this?" but then I read it a second time and it made me think. No one does care ...

Woah, that was a good story. I've read something a bit like this before. But this was ten times better and a hell of a lot more intense. So there ...

Wow, best story I've ever read.

Wow. How genius of you to think of the Sun and Moon in love but destined to be apart. So tragic, but gorgeous. I have nothing to say for improvement ...

Tears in my eyes right now....

Well, I was instantly intrigued because... it's a love poem. Shameful.. I love the longing the narrator feels to be always holding his hand. It's really cute :) I don't ...

AWESOMEEEEE!!!! This is definitely the sort of thing I like to read, haha. The depressing love poems and stories... I really really like the fact that the narrator wants the ...

Heya!! This is a really good and powerful poem. I sort of agree with @Hannah about the rhyming but I don't think it's too much of a problem. At times ...