AWESOMEEEEE!!!!
This is definitely the sort of thing I like to read, haha. The depressing love poems and stories... I really really like the fact that the narrator wants the 'heartbreaker' to be sad and abandoned but then in the last few stanzas you say about how the narrator still loves him anyway. The format is cool, like how you have "I don't know" as one separate line.
I don't know what to correct because I'm a sucker for anything like this plus it's an awesome poem.
Love it, keep writing
~The World
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