TheWeather

Hey, Weather here with a review. You have a great piece of poetry here, I like how the mood shifts as the poem continues on at each point, each verse ...

Hey Weather here with a review. I love coffee also and poems about coffee, so I of course liked the concept of this piece. However I did have a few ...

Hey, Weather here with a review. Well, I thought this was a very personal and sensitive piece, it had a lot of thought put into it and a range of ...

Hey Weather here to review. Right, I hope I make more sense than nonsense first and foremost. I liked the general concept of this essay. It had good ideas and ...

Hello Weather here to review. I presume you've opted for not punctuating your poem or having any capitalization. It was interesting to me, It may have been intended to be ...

Hey Weather here with a review. Welcome to YWS by the way! Well I think this poem held an interesting concept and the title really grabbed my attention. "Days are ...

Hey Weather here with a review! Well I really liked the story you're telling here and the slightly dramatic element to it. It was also descriptive so the reader can ...

Hey Weather here with a review! Welcome to YWS by the way. Well I really liked that this poem looked at failure in a positive light and not in a ...

Hey, Weather here to review. In a way I found this piece sad yet hopeful, like despite this character feeling insecure they would move on from it, I guess in ...

Hi Weather here to review! Well, I loved how positive this poem was, it was happy and certainly put me in a good mood. It was very descriptive and simple ...

Hi, Weather here to review! Well you have a nice poem going on here it's different and the rhyme scheme worked well in this piece, rhyme can be a bit ...

Hello Avalon! Weather here with a review. "Will you stay with me for just one night? to remind me of what I lost. Will you stay with me after that ...

Hello, Weather here with a review. I liked the story you were telling in this poem, it fit with the title well. I assume the lack of punctuation was intentional? ...

Hey Weather here to review! I really liked the imagery you're working with here and the coherent vocabulary used throughout. I also liked how each line got you hooked and ...

Hey Weather here with a review! As always I like how your poetry has a spiritual mood and centers around darkness becoming light. I liked the emotions that developed throughout ...