TheWalkinDude

I want to be among the brazen, like the war heroes, brandishing hearts of the deepest purple hue and scars to remind them of how they grew. I do like ...

Before I start my review, I just want to say wow. This is definitely one of those short stories that actually catches one when they're not looking. There was definitely ...

Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to society, you’re rebellious and obscene. Love this whole stanza. It's a great opener, it pulls the reader in, ...

This... makes my muscles bunch, dude. I'm sorry, dude, as this could be very well-written, but it's so muddled and chopping-blocked. It makes me want to eat every book on ...

Normally, I hate making a comment or review so short, but I promised myself that I would comment/review the first thing I read upon breaking my review fast. Well, anyways, ...

Heheh, so true. This poem made me giggle just for the fact that it was indeed a humorous poem that made some funny, yet obvious points, like the part about ...

Build Me Freedom On This Day In an empty barn on (I think you meant this word here instead) a desolate farm leaves litter the ground . (period) S poken ...

Well.... Okay, let's see here. I must say that this poem is... well, it's a mouthful. Poetically, I'll admit, it's pretty good. It shows good writing skills and a bit ...

Yes. I will admit, I am not in love with this poem as I've been with some of your others, but I really liked how you wrote this. In short, ...

Well, certainly a vague poem you've got here. Pain throbs on the thought of my wake. A silver castle, crumbles. With every breath I take. Nothing is left to hold ...

Man, this reminds me a little bit of "Denis the Menace". Good show and movies and all, but I'm just saying. Well, except I don't think his adventures went so ...

Winter is not one of my favorite seasons. I'm a summer and fall person, because that's when all the swimming, camping, and hiking is! But despite the fact of winter ...

Wow. Heavy, dude. However heavy, this was still a nicely written piece of work. In a sense it kind of reminded me of a monologue, except in poetic form. I ...

I Never thought.............. First problem here is the overuse of those dots. The correct way to do those dots is to put three in a row (...) when you're interjecting ...

As far as the repetition goes, I'll admit, I'm not the biggest fan. Repetition, at least to me, is a tricky sort of thing. If you don't do it right ...