Hello. I'm from the Philippines also. Now, that being said, I think that the way you used imagery of nature and coupled it with Filipino words gave this poem such an original touch. I honestly really love this. Your imagery was simple yet so very vivid. I could see and feel everything that you talked about in this poem.
I really want to write a more substantial review but I think that all I really want to say is that I think you use words brilliantly. Your father captures images through photographs and I believe that you capture images just as vividly in your words. This is an amazing poem and I would love to read more from you.
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