TheUnnatural

Lovely poem! And it was nice that you got inspired by the fact that it was raining :D I always get the greatest ideas too when it's raining because the ...

Ahhh another beautiful poem I love like every single writing piece from you (will stalk you). Okay so like when I read it through the first time I felt really ...

Wow long, amazing poem! Unnatural is here to review your work! I'm usually quite harsh, but don't take everything in because half the time I don't know what I'm writing. ...

First, welcome! Welcome to YWS, and if you need any help or have any questions, you can ask anyone here because nobody bites. :) These are the poems I see ...

Ahh, this is another poem like Dream. I like these poems :) I love your style of writing as well :) I don't know why the sentences were separated like ...

I'm sorry, I'm literally obsessed with all your poems. They're all sooo good. (I bet you're getting lots of notifications from me) Ok, nothing really to correct here because it's ...

Hi, Unnatural here to review :) This really caught my attention because I love spinning around sometimes and thinking about what it feels like while I'm spinning :P Hahaha I ...

Ohhh god. Loving every single one of your one-word titled short poems. I'm not going to ask you to change "pressence" to "presence" because I see two other people have ...

Hello, Unnatural here to review! Happy review day! Go Reviewlution! Beauuuutiful simple, short poem. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this. It's one of the poems that are ...

Hahaha wow, I really liked how you approached this a different way! It was really fresh and creative. :) Alright. Let me get reviewing. You think that your alone. crushed ...

Really good poem. You used really good strong words that are very descriptive and good at capturing the readers (me). I didn't exactly understand some parts like: And beginning, lost ...

Wow, beautiful, nice, short sentence. I literally want to frame it up on my wall. It really punches and stares at me, and the picture is a nice addition :) ...

Hello, Unnatural here to review your work! I really liked the poem, and hope you write more like this! I think you should just add more detail overall to the ...

HAPPY REVIEW DAY :) Wellll Unnatural here to review your work! So I started reading this because well first, you're my friend (i'm following you), so I mean, I obviously ...

Wonderful, just wonderful piece of short poem. (I love short poems they literally just punch at me) I thought it was really quick and almost rushing without any commas or ...