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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Traumatic Times

    Hello there......! This was beautiful. It had a kind of raw emotional feel to it, like it was direct from heart. I could relate to every word written here. Though ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Puppy love

    Hello there..!! I think this was adorable. Like everyone else said, this poem was rich in imagery. I could see the girl dancing and the boy standing in the shadows ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: Her Name was Ecstasy... she died

    Hello again! I just read another one of your works & I have to say, you're good. I really loved this one too, especially the line about hitting like hammer. ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Warning: don't take the trip

    Hello there...! Okay firstly, I really don't see any reason for this to be rated. Like you said, it is actually DISCOURAGING drugs, so all's good. I absolutely loved this. ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: the angel

    Hey...! I absolutely loved it! It was amazing. You've got an amazing way with words. The poem spoke out to me, I could feel every thing you described in here, ...

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: please.

    Hey...! I really liked this piece. It is so full of emotion, raw emotion. I can feel the pain, if you know what I mean. The words are so convincing. ...

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Asexual growing up

    Hey..! Okay, so I think that this piece was simple, yet beautiful. You captured the idea of asexuality very beautifully. There were no big, fancy words. Just the idea, the ...

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: When I was younger, I read fairytales

    This was so gorgeous. I had a smile on my face throughout the poem. The idea is so sweet, and you have executed it so beautifully. It was unnecessary to ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our love was black and white

    Hello.....! You've got a beautiful poem here. I loved it. It was simple, sweet and overall, a joy to read. I enjoyed it thoroughly. My favourite lines were ' I ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: She had asthma

    Hey there...! I absolutely loved this! This was beautiful, had an aura of something magical about it from start to finish. I'll be honest- when I read the title, I ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "Perfect" Chemistry

    Hey there...! I absolutely loved reading your poem. Science is so, like, logical, and poetry is more art, more heart- felt. I never thought a combination of these two could ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Way

    Hey! I really like this piece. It's short and simple and yet so deep and meaningful. Your choice of words is simple. But these simple words come together to form ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Dodder Vine

    Hey! I think this piece was beautiful...heart- breaking, yet beautiful. I can relate to Alex, about being a social outcast. I know what it feels like when you are rejected ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, General Re: A Sanctified Heart

    Hey....I absolutely love this piece! I think it's beautiful. I love the way it rhymes. There are no major nit- picks that I have. Only that while the rest of ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: you taught me to scrape moon-dust off the moon

    Oh my God....this was absolutely terrifically breath- taking and gorgeous! I love this so much. The emotion is so strong throughout the poem. I could feel every single word that ...

    May 18, 2014


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