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Re: The Observer
Hey Raven :) Shauzer here reviewing, I liked and didn't like this story. By the way, apologies for any offence, I can be harsh. I mean, it was a good ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: Paradise.
Hey Sushi :) Shauzer here reviewing, I did like this poem. Although it's hard to find one of your pieces I don't like :D The Idea was clever and I ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: Problems i have
Hey Joshua :) Shauzer here reviewing! I liked this poem, more than your previous one. The fact that it was about something that happened to you made the writing better ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Labels
Hey sushi :) Shauzer here reviewing, Was very glad to read another one of your works, and I didn't know you did opinion pieces :) Listen, if I knew how ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: dreams of my memories gone by
Hey Josh :) Shauzer here reviewing :) I don't usually do poems so really you shouldn't think anything of my review, good or bad. I didn't mind this, though. It ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: Devil Touch - Prologue
Hey Sushi, that's a damn good prologue. I'm sorry if my review is shorter than some of the monstrosities of things I see below :O but I'm working off a ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: My Mind
Hi Cheetah, Shauzer here reviewing :) I always have trouble reviewing haiku s :D So short, there nice to read but a pain to write about, I did liked this ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: To My Ex
Hi Strange... Shauzer here reviewing :) Hmm..... That was... I don't really know how to review this :D i thought it was very funny... Certainly a shock when I went ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: The Everlasting Consort
Hi Anniepotter, Shauzer here, a pleasure to be reviewing this beautiful poem. This piece should be an inspiration to young aspiring poets everywhere, a testament to what goo writing should ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: She said you kiss like a fish.
Hi tenyo, Shauzer here reviewing, Only been reviewing stuff with no reviews lately, but this was so excellent I just had to review :) It's very funny, for a start. ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: The English C
Man, I hope you realize that I mean this as good criticism, I'm not trying to be mean. But I didn't like that at all. It was short even for ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Untitled inspiration (ideas greatly appreciated
Hi CorianderLee, Shauzer here reviewing :) I'll just jump straight in :) This story...Well it was strange, there were some things I liked and some things that just didn't read ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Beyond the Eye
The Shauzer here reviewing :). Hi fictional, this poem was very odd! I mean it in a good way, if you crack open a human imagination like an egg, this ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: mama
The Shauzer here reviewin, :) Hi ravyness, that was... poweful? Only way I can describe it, for something just stuck together, it really has an impact. I'm not sure if ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: People and Paper
Hello :) Shauzer here reviewing, I thought that this piece was absolutely amazing. I mean, I was at school reading it and I actually e-mailed the link to myself so ...
Dec 13, 2013
