TheShauzer

Hi carmenbluestar, TS here reviewing :) I was hesitant to review this piece because of how honest it sounded. See, usually when people write such an honest piece they don't ...

Hi Jack, TheShauzer here reviewing from a lovely resort in Portugal :) Obviously I like the idea you have, although it is not original. I mean, if you spent some ...

What was this about? Sorry, Hello RainbowPowerPonies, TheShauzer here reviewing. Um... This poem really confused me. I'm not quite sure what it was all about, obviously. There is no rhythm ...

Hey Bookwolf :) Good news, this wasn't bad at all for your first attempt! My own was absolute crap,l it had no original idea or thought, no rhythm, no anything. ...

Hey Margo :) Nice to see some funny poetry on YWS, in my opinion the usual material is very morbid and it was fun seeing an exception! What's a halloweenie? ...

Hey there ScarlettFire :) TS here reviewing, I enjoyed this piece - its nice when you come across a more experienced poem; you don't have to spend time explaining what ...

Helo pendr, TS here reviewing :) I did like this poem, and although I do not watch Merlin I think I can still get it. There were some elements to ...

Hi anshira :) Shauzer here reviewing, I liked this piece, for the most part. Although there were parts that didn't fit quite well, you used a few really nice phrases ...

Nice one DarkHeart :) Shauzer here reviewing, This was a really nice poem, one of the higher class of YWS. I'm not sure I understand what you mean by oblivion. ...

Hey Sushi, Shauzer here reviewing :) I liked this chapter, and I think that this could even be published with some touch-ups :) It's most likely better than my attempt ...

Hey GreenTulip :) Shauzer here reviewing, This poem was great as a poem. You described everything nicely and it was easy to read. It flowed well, each line following the ...

Woh :O Hi joallover, Shauzer here reviewing, nice name by the way!!! This was really deep, I mean, it's one of those poems you like just because of its depth ...

Hey Gaurav :) Shauzer here reviewing, Happy to be reviewing today actually, haven't done a short in ages just poetry :) This was, I'll admit, a great idea. Great how ...

Hey Nargles, Shauzer here reviewing :) I thought this poem was deep. I guess deepness was kind of what this poem was all about. It's sad, I don't know how. ...

Hey TJSD, Shauzer here reviewing :) I liked this haiku, but I don't really understand why you said 'Only hearts are lost.'? There's nothing from the last line to lead ...