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  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Fofofoforced Joke Haiku

    I'm so stifled as to how I'm supposed to review. i want points, d******! I mean *cough cough* I'm only reviewing because I'm very passionate about joke haiku's. I always ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: reflected reality

    Who cares about the punctuation right? It's the content that matters here. I started off unsure. I was reading and my thoughts were like, "Hmm... a bit amateur, a bit ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forever

    I'm so unsure as to how I feel about it. I mean, I like the ideas and the true story you're telling us because I myself am in a long ...

    Jul 7, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Someday

    That was really nice hermione. Usually I would never review lyrical pieces and to be honest I wouldn't have reviewed this one. But then I clicked into it and started ...

    Jul 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Does it Bother You? (Edited)

    I complete agree with snoink as regards the whole 'blog entry' comment. It's nice and I know you're trying the whole 'taking a stand' thing, and I support your opinions, ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Senseless Hope

    Nice. I'm not going to go into details because really I can't, and anything I say will just be for the sake of writing more. But I like what you've ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Rearview Mirror

    Hi there, Guilty Spark. TS here reviewing. This will be the first review on this poem that actually offers critique, I think :') I liked a fair few details of ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Paper Crane

    Hi Firepower :) you reviewed my piece, so here I am! TS reviewing. I liked the idea behind this, a person whose obviously very important to you or in general, ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bedtime

    Hey Purple, TS here reviewing. So, I was surprised when I looked over and saw the name 'Purple' again after only reviewing a piece of yours yesterday, but then I ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Our Tree

    Hi Purple, TS here reviewing. I saw your name and thought, 'Hey, I think I've reviewed one of this person's poems before!' I looked at the related items and noticed ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You know what?

    Hi PoeToaster, TS here reviewing on a lovely review day. Your piece was very emotional indeed. It had very strong vocab and definitely told us how you felt. It had ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a really big H

    Hi vibe, TS here reviewing :) This piece, in all honesty, bored me. A piece of poetry should do the exact opposite of this, it should drag you in to ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fragile surrender

    Hi Flite, TS here reviewing. I really liked this piece; it had nice imagery, a lovely rhythm throughout and a nice use of vocab. The flow never faltered too, which ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Overload

    Hello Mr. Musicandme, TS here reviewing :) I enjoyed this piece more than a lot I've come upon today - so thanks for that! For the good parts, I thought ...

    Nov 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Cuils

    Hi Johanna, TS here reviewing the strangest piece I have ever seen on YWS. I'm sorry, but this review won't be very long because.... I thought this was brilliant! You ...

    Nov 29, 2014


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien