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Re: Fofofoforced Joke Haiku
I'm so stifled as to how I'm supposed to review. i want points, d******! I mean *cough cough* I'm only reviewing because I'm very passionate about joke haiku's. I always ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: reflected reality
Who cares about the punctuation right? It's the content that matters here. I started off unsure. I was reading and my thoughts were like, "Hmm... a bit amateur, a bit ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Forever
I'm so unsure as to how I feel about it. I mean, I like the ideas and the true story you're telling us because I myself am in a long ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Someday
That was really nice hermione. Usually I would never review lyrical pieces and to be honest I wouldn't have reviewed this one. But then I clicked into it and started ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Does it Bother You? (Edited)
I complete agree with snoink as regards the whole 'blog entry' comment. It's nice and I know you're trying the whole 'taking a stand' thing, and I support your opinions, ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: Senseless Hope
Nice. I'm not going to go into details because really I can't, and anything I say will just be for the sake of writing more. But I like what you've ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: Rearview Mirror
Hi there, Guilty Spark. TS here reviewing. This will be the first review on this poem that actually offers critique, I think :') I liked a fair few details of ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Paper Crane
Hi Firepower :) you reviewed my piece, so here I am! TS reviewing. I liked the idea behind this, a person whose obviously very important to you or in general, ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Bedtime
Hey Purple, TS here reviewing. So, I was surprised when I looked over and saw the name 'Purple' again after only reviewing a piece of yours yesterday, but then I ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Our Tree
Hi Purple, TS here reviewing. I saw your name and thought, 'Hey, I think I've reviewed one of this person's poems before!' I looked at the related items and noticed ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: You know what?
Hi PoeToaster, TS here reviewing on a lovely review day. Your piece was very emotional indeed. It had very strong vocab and definitely told us how you felt. It had ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: a really big H
Hi vibe, TS here reviewing :) This piece, in all honesty, bored me. A piece of poetry should do the exact opposite of this, it should drag you in to ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Fragile surrender
Hi Flite, TS here reviewing. I really liked this piece; it had nice imagery, a lovely rhythm throughout and a nice use of vocab. The flow never faltered too, which ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Overload
Hello Mr. Musicandme, TS here reviewing :) I enjoyed this piece more than a lot I've come upon today - so thanks for that! For the good parts, I thought ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: Cuils
Hi Johanna, TS here reviewing the strangest piece I have ever seen on YWS. I'm sorry, but this review won't be very long because.... I thought this was brilliant! You ...
Nov 29, 2014
