TheJennaRaiton

This is a quick poem that just waltzed into my head :) hope you like it Purple What is purple? Questions are always interesting The color purple means : Sunset, ...

This is gruesome. But in a good way. The speaker of the poem has a strong hate for someone, obviously. I wish there was more. Why do you hate this ...

A stolid blue pencil is running quickly. Running on paper? The angry green pen pursues ... What. How does a pen pursue? Stange personification. the pencil through the tall trees ...

Buried deep under your skin A monster waits, hidden within Interesting... Sharpened claws, filled with spite The monster sits at the dead of night Ha, whaaaat? I got the feel ...

I want you to understand I want you to touch my hand with your hand. I want your love and know that I'll be your man. AAA pattern? I like ...

She stands there in the corner: She weeps; This is a good start! It really grabbed my attention. I hold in my hand, I don't think there needs to be ...

Nice work. I enjoyed this. Short and sweet, my favorite kind of poetry.Your message was clearly delivered. Did you have a specific rhyme scheme, or did choice words just go ...

ok, I know the rhyme scheme is messed up but I like it this way. It gives it a twist. I think this is about becoming a teenager, but truly, ...

Poems that spell out a girl’s name are a very romantic thing to do, but it's also very difficult. Congratulations of achieve such a work! I hope you’re planning on ...

I think silent1 is wrong, new members deserve to have their works reviewed too! I'll start with the good. Your diction and word flow were excellent, your stanza breaks were ...