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Nice work. I enjoyed this. Short and sweet, my favorite kind of poetry.Your message was clearly delivered.
Did you have a specific rhyme scheme, or did choice words just go together? There isn't an exact ABAB pattern, or even one I can make out. I may be wrong, it might not be a rhyming poem.
Strangely, when I read that aloud I got faster and faster as I spoke, and it sounded amazing. You've some skill with words that's for sure, really well written. I love it.
- GhostlyImpressions.