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Re: i kissed your lips and tasted jack daniels, you told me you didnt drink so
Hello! Wow, what a poem. It's slightly gritty, heartfelt, and somber all at once. And in such a short poem too. Short poems that convey a big message are some ...
Jan 15, 2024 -
Re: A Little Care
Hello! This is a wonderful poem about powering through tough times despite challenges. The narrator describes their symptoms and their disappreciation for them. The narrator recieves declines to rest
Jan 15, 2024 -
Re: Clothes
Hello! This...this is a work of art. A simple, bland poem where one is left with almost nothing to review on, but those three lines. They say so little but ...
Sep 20, 2023 -
Re: 2 am thoughts
Hello! This is a nice little poem that reminds me of those late nights where you just stare up at the ceiling and think. The details of the poem are ...
Sep 19, 2023 -
Re: Gas Stove
Hello! This is a nice little poem about a stove. It's short and sweet, exactly how I like my poems. It describes a stove top exactly how we percieve it ...
Aug 17, 2023 -
Re: these hands of mine
Hello! This is a beautifully detailed poem about what I think people wish they could do. What they wish they could stop. The details in this poem are fascinating. The ...
Aug 10, 2023 -
Re: Goodbye My First Car
Hello! This is such a sweet poem! The use of personification for the car is very well done. The use of sorrowful phrases such as, "it's over and she's never ...
Aug 6, 2023 -
Re: a 2000's fad
Hello! This poem shows that some things lose their purpose once better things are offered. Starting with a tricycle and then a scooter, and then a bicycle, ending with someone ...
Aug 1, 2023 -
Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page
Hello! A nice poem about a writer's struggle to put something on the page. It's a very common problem among writer's, and the fact you wrote about that problem is ...
Jul 30, 2023 -
Re: Sleep is Hiding
Hello! First off, I'm writing this at 1:00 am, so right now, in the moment, I relate to this extremely well. The repetition of the word sleep can be seen ...
Jul 16, 2023 -
Re: jade
Hello! This poem gives a large sense of someone who is craving love and may be new to it. I can definitely understand a person feeling selfish for having someone's ...
Jul 16, 2023 -
Re: Mr. Fog Morning Kiss
Hello! This poem is short, but it does capture the idea of an addiction. The repetition of the word "kiss" brings a sense of need and love. In this poem, ...
Jul 8, 2023 -
Re: i'm the ashes falling into the tray
Hello! This poem captures the worry a person can experience when in a relationship. For such a short poem, it's symbolism delivers, and it hits hard. The comparison between ashes ...
Jul 8, 2023 -
Re: God d*** it, Why?
Hello! This poem is a great way of saying that despite being with someone special, your anger still stays with you. Or at least that's what I saw. Bolding "God ...
Jun 25, 2023 -
Re: Delusional Love Colors
Hello! This poem is an extremely good way of describing how love feels and how it can go awry. The inclusion of words like dazzling, sweet, and color show the ...
Jun 17, 2023
