Hello!
First off, I'm writing this at 1:00 am, so right now, in the moment, I relate to this extremely well. The repetition of the word sleep can be seen as sleep taking over the person's body, despite the person wanting to do other things, such as play, write, and color. Maybe this could be seen as how an excited child sees nighttime. Seeing how some children see sleep as unimportant.
Again, I love shorter poems, because not only does it challenge the writer to fit a story in such few lines, but it challenges the reader to figure out the meaning and dive deeper into the poem. I love the ending to where it seems like the narrator sees that falling asleep is inevitable and will eventually happen.
I love your poems, they really make me think about what they could possibly mean and let me make my own figurations.
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