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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i kissed your lips and tasted jack daniels, you told me you didnt drink so

    Hello! Wow, what a poem. It's slightly gritty, heartfelt, and somber all at once. And in such a short poem too. Short poems that convey a big message are some ...

    Tue Jan 16, 2024 12:04 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Little Care

    Hello! This is a wonderful poem about powering through tough times despite challenges. The narrator describes their symptoms and their disappreciation for them. The narrator recieves declines to rest

    Mon Jan 15, 2024 11:54 pm
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Clothes

    Hello! This...this is a work of art. A simple, bland poem where one is left with almost nothing to review on, but those three lines. They say so little but ...

    Wed Sep 20, 2023 8:27 pm
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: 2 am thoughts

    Hello! This is a nice little poem that reminds me of those late nights where you just stare up at the ceiling and think. The details of the poem are ...

    Wed Sep 20, 2023 2:35 am
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Gas Stove

    Hello! This is a nice little poem about a stove. It's short and sweet, exactly how I like my poems. It describes a stove top exactly how we percieve it ...

    Thu Aug 17, 2023 7:55 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: these hands of mine

    Hello! This is a beautifully detailed poem about what I think people wish they could do. What they wish they could stop. The details in this poem are fascinating. The ...

    Thu Aug 10, 2023 10:07 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Goodbye My First Car

    Hello! This is such a sweet poem! The use of personification for the car is very well done. The use of sorrowful phrases such as, "it's over and she's never ...

    Sun Aug 06, 2023 4:10 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: a 2000's fad

    Hello! This poem shows that some things lose their purpose once better things are offered. Starting with a tricycle and then a scooter, and then a bicycle, ending with someone ...

    Tue Aug 01, 2023 10:16 pm
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page

    Hello! A nice poem about a writer's struggle to put something on the page. It's a very common problem among writer's, and the fact you wrote about that problem is ...

    Mon Jul 31, 2023 3:57 am
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Sleep is Hiding

    Hello! First off, I'm writing this at 1:00 am, so right now, in the moment, I relate to this extremely well. The repetition of the word sleep can be seen ...

    Sun Jul 16, 2023 5:13 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: jade

    Hello! This poem gives a large sense of someone who is craving love and may be new to it. I can definitely understand a person feeling selfish for having someone's ...

    Sun Jul 16, 2023 4:52 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mr. Fog Morning Kiss

    Hello! This poem is short, but it does capture the idea of an addiction. The repetition of the word "kiss" brings a sense of need and love. In this poem, ...

    Sun Jul 09, 2023 3:32 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: i'm the ashes falling into the tray

    Hello! This poem captures the worry a person can experience when in a relationship. For such a short poem, it's symbolism delivers, and it hits hard. The comparison between ashes ...

    Sat Jul 08, 2023 4:21 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: God d*** it, Why?

    Hello! This poem is a great way of saying that despite being with someone special, your anger still stays with you. Or at least that's what I saw. Bolding "God ...

    Mon Jun 26, 2023 3:21 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Delusional Love Colors

    Hello! This poem is an extremely good way of describing how love feels and how it can go awry. The inclusion of words like dazzling, sweet, and color show the ...

    Sun Jun 18, 2023 1:47 am


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