Tenyo

Ah, I like! The narration of this is fantastic- but I'll get to the good stuff later. Gritty stuff first. Grammar Basics: Full stops are used to end a sentence. ...

Hey SPAuthor You know, my favourite book in the world is the Jungle Book. I love stories about animals = D So that puts you off to a good start ...

Hey Anoia Appearances: This hurt to read -_- The paragraphs are huge and chunky which makes them tough on the eyes (which have to focus harder to stay on the ...

Hey Chetan! I love your display picture. First impressions: I found this really, really hard to relate to, and I think that is one of the most important things with ...

Hey Perse! The thing I love about this poem is the viewpoint of it. When I imagine it I feel like I'm looking through the eyes of a child again, ...

Positive: she had a bad habit of road rage which usually resulted in unfortunate injury for her victims - Haha! I very much like this line, I can't get over ...

Charlie Chaplin? I know this quote is of some importance or significance, but it threw me off a lot. Your first sentence, your introduction, needs to grab your reader and ...

=D I like. But this is critisism, so I shall be critical. Issue Issue Moina was told to go to the car with Jimmy and gave her keys to Selina? ...

Pftaha! “No kidding, I thought you were a talking dog actually.” - Oh how this made me laugh. I like Jimmy a lot, because he has brought out a bit ...

Review #2 Selina Her personality is fluctuating a lot so she definately needs some work at this point. I imagine that by the time you reach chapter eighteen you'll be ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your novel! Like... All of it! You're probably not going to like me when I'm done. First of all through most chapters I'll give ...

Hey Evans! Introduction: Your introduction is how you introduce your character and the world they're in. Your task is to bring your reader into the story and give them a ...

Hey Granger! I think of the reasons I generally tend to dislike prologues is because of how tempting it can be to use them as an info-dump, and that is ...

Ooh, I like! This is very short, and it doesn't all piece together too well, but I think that's part of what's good about it. I can imagine some poor ...

Hey Ajt! Interesting poem. It's a little hard to get into because it seems more like a stream of thoughts than poetry, but then that may be my bias opinion. ...