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Re: No More
I don't usually read poetry, but I am a huge fan of doctor who, so I decided to read this. I loved this. I like how you took the main ...
Sun Dec 08, 2013 3:49 am -
Re: Clockwork
There was really good writing in this, and I really like it, however, I was a little confused as to the time travel part. I'm not sure if i missed ...
Wed Dec 04, 2013 6:34 am -
Re: Halcyon
This is a really good story and I enjoyed reading it. I was a little confused in the middle, but that's possibly due to the fact that i was reading ...
Wed Dec 04, 2013 6:22 am -
Re: Un Malentendu
This is really good. I was captivated throughout the whole thing. The longer I read, the more uneasy I became and the tone was perfect for this piece. I like ...
Wed Dec 04, 2013 6:13 am -
Re: Liam
This was a super cute story. I loved all of it. I like how you portrayed different reactions to coming out. There were a couple small spelling errors, like "I ...
Wed Dec 04, 2013 6:06 am -
Re: Mistress of the Moon
I started reading this because I LOVE greek mythology and it's always annoyed me how Romans appropriated it. Because of that, i absolutely love this story. I was a little ...
Tue Nov 26, 2013 10:58 pm -
Re: Confusion Tricks The Mind
This is really cool. And so creepy (in a good way!) I was a little confused at the line "Oh no. It's the voice of a girl. I miscarried a ...
Tue Nov 26, 2013 10:44 pm -
Re: The Soldier
I really liked this. It got the emotions across very clearly. I liked how it focused on the repercussions of being a soldier, but not just on the soldiers themselves ...
Tue Nov 26, 2013 10:39 pm -
Re: A Fateful Find
Wow, this was so good. There were a few grammatical issues (like "I drug blankets..."), but those are minor. Overall, though, the story was fantastic. You described the scenes perfectly ...
Tue Nov 26, 2013 10:27 pm -
Re: Struggle for Sanity
This is really powerful. The description of what it feels like come across very clearly to the reader. It's a little confusing at the end, how it seems to end, ...
Mon Nov 25, 2013 6:23 am -
Re: Flickering
This is absolutely amazing. I was fully engaged in the story for the entire time. You did a great job of creating the entire world so that the reader could ...
Mon Nov 25, 2013 6:15 am -
Re: Who needs nine lives?
I loved this piece. I thought it was the perfect length. It gets across everything it needs to while adding a lot of character. Your writing still is generally mature, ...
Mon Nov 25, 2013 6:01 am -
Re: Unbelievable night
Wow, this is really good, especially for someone who's native language as something other than English. I agree with the previous reviewer in that the weather at the beginning is ...
Mon Nov 25, 2013 5:53 am
