Temi

That's actually a very nice idea and observation... Thank you very much for that.

Thank you very much for the review. However, it's funny because in my mind I feel you reviewed this piece like it's a prose work. So that what comes off ...

Thank you Hannah! I will definitely learn the customs of the natives!

Wow! This is profound... I think one major answer to your reservations is the fact that I rushed the work. I usually don't write stories because I prefer poems. Thus, ...

Oh okay... See your point.

Duly noted...

Relax! No hassle... especially for someone like you. you got the flame just let it flow...

I like what you've done with this poem and especially your use of a ''matter-of-fact'' voice. It helps convey a level of truthfulness to your poem which is needed to ...

AHH! I did not think of that. You have my apologies...

Delilah is a biblical allusion of the woman who tricked Samson in the bible. Sorry for the inconvenience...

Thank you. It's okay...

You're good!

When I read this poem I feel like a lot's missing. You have a good concept but the mode of dispensation is quite faulty. Good: There is simplicity and playfulness ...

Hey thanks! Iroko in my country is a type of tree! Thanks!

This is absolutely remarkable, with a deep sense of maturity and experience! The word choice clearly depicts sensous imagery and conveys your voice strongly making us understand the message of ...