TegaEdais

Extremely personal, don't think so. I'm Tega by the way. I think this poem was well written, in terms of structure and theme. But the punctuation and enjambment inclusion seems ...

I envy your brain.

Hey friend. You started pretty strong, running on lines like that is hardwork, but you did it and i had no doubt you will succed at that endeavour. Generally your ...

PLEASE do not read this. I'm glad I did not listen to your advice. Nice witty poem, powerful imagery, though i can not imagine orion stomping his "hunting song" and ...

Hey nice work.But where does it lead to. Hope don't sound arrogant, for this needs further editing. I love the rhyme scheme; very splendid I'd say. This work should have ...

Hey, an adorable piece of work.I'm oblige to feel jealous, for you sounded a bit like me. The message passed in the poem is very powerful, as relating to the ...

days of gold, a very interesting title i say. this work is quite lengthy so i just give a few advice as my review;take time to edit your work, use ...

.Great! a fabulous work. No rhyme scheme makes this already good poem superb,the first three stanzas are wow!."it was trough development i would be fulfilled",i don't really understand that phrase.The

Oh!,dear me,please do give him his review.i was enchanted with this work,in fact i almost blushed.the lines are linked together powerfully,short but superb,how ever i observed some..should i say mista

.WELL HERE IS MY REVIEW,DON'T CALL ME ARROGANT.I enjoyed this work,but only a little.its so amazing how a poet minds work and i can 'undoubtfully' say you are one(poet) of ...

Hey!,quite a piece of work to smile at,although there are a few errors in it.Let the review BEGIN! 'First' of all should i say the title is shortsighted,it doesn't looking ...

Are we friends yet,I'd say yes.Lovely piece of work from the first line to the last.This work carry loads of emotions,but it carries this emotions blindly.Its a sad one,but you ...

i am honestly glad i met this work,quite what i'm looking for to end a fabulous day!,very enchanting filled with awesome rhymes and loads of hidden figurative words,what more can ...

I love it! The first haiku i meet on YWS and its good.first let me piont out that,although its a lovely poem,its quite uneventful.I couldn't see something happening,i think it ...

Perfect! Have also thought of this.But i thought emotion wasn't fully carried in this poem,for its theme and plot,i solemnly swear emotion would have made it 'Perfecter'.Casting emotions with the ...