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TealElephant

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fanfiction Re: Let it Go (Mount Doom Beats)

    This poem is very funny. What makes it really funny to me is how Sauron and Elsa are like fire and ice... two totally different characters(see what I did there? ...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: School

    Hey! Ok first off, I have a question. How do you leave a review for a piece that is only 22 words long? I'll do my best. This poem had ...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Sisters

    Hello! This is going to be a somewhat short review/comment...sorry. First off: Short story or poem? I was sort of confused when it came to the category. Now don't get ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i tried you on, but you didn't fit.

    HI there! Wow I really like this poem. One of the parts I really enjoyed is that you used many similes and metaphors in pretty much every line. By using ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: We All Shouted Terrorist. We All Hated Them.

    I LOVE THIS! You have really captured the essence of a rivalry that has lasted many years. I love it how you have also looked at the situation(bombing) from two ...

    May 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Call It Sanity

    First off just let me say... REALLY GREAT POEM! I like the fact that it is relate-able. Many people have this "mind wandering" problem. Well, according to the beginning of ...

    May 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page

    Hello! Haha this was very humorous. I especially like the part when you wrote: "Dear stupid blank page, why don't you care? About a poor idea-less child, who's pulling out ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: We are writers. We are dreamers.

    Hello! I just have to thank you for actually appreciating the art of writing! Most people don't understand how much work goes into writing only one verse. I like how ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Deathly Mint

    Hey! Wow. Who would've guessed?... lol. What I really like about this poem is that it is a totally random, funny topic that hardly anyone writes about: Deathly Mint. I ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Writer’s Curse

    Hello! I lovelovelovelove LOVE this! The rhyme and rhythms of the poem helped it flow. I also greatly appreciate the word choice you used in creating this poem. It really ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Earth Is Yours

    This is insanely amazing! I especially love the part where it states that... "Yet be warned: it will be destroyed before the trees regain their blossoms. And I will relish ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Nightmare

    Hello! I really enjoyed this piece. I like the plot twist at the end when it talks about how all the poem is really just a dream... Well, a nightmare. ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Tiger is Brave

    Hello... I love this poem! You did a great job in explaining what being brave really means. I especially like the lines: "Brave is a choice and not a trait, ...

    Apr 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Lady Oh Lady

    Hello! This poem was very pleasant to read. I especially like the last line: "Lady of love, The olive branch dove." The rhyming helped make the piece have a nice ...

    Apr 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Hold Me Gently

    Hey Joy! Wow. I love this poem. I especially love the last part when you say: "Love me unconditionally, And I will never let you go." I must ask...How do ...

    Apr 21, 2015


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