Young Writers Society

This poem is very funny. What makes it really funny to me is how Sauron and Elsa are like fire and ice... two totally different characters(see what I did there? ...

Hey! Ok first off, I have a question. How do you leave a review for a piece that is only 22 words long? I'll do my best. This poem had ...

Hello! This is going to be a somewhat short review/comment...sorry. First off: Short story or poem? I was sort of confused when it came to the category. Now don't get ...

HI there! Wow I really like this poem. One of the parts I really enjoyed is that you used many similes and metaphors in pretty much every line. By using ...

I LOVE THIS! You have really captured the essence of a rivalry that has lasted many years. I love it how you have also looked at the situation(bombing) from two ...

First off just let me say... REALLY GREAT POEM! I like the fact that it is relate-able. Many people have this "mind wandering" problem. Well, according to the beginning of ...

Hello! Haha this was very humorous. I especially like the part when you wrote: "Dear stupid blank page, why don't you care? About a poor idea-less child, who's pulling out ...

Hello! I just have to thank you for actually appreciating the art of writing! Most people don't understand how much work goes into writing only one verse. I like how ...

Hey! Wow. Who would've guessed?... lol. What I really like about this poem is that it is a totally random, funny topic that hardly anyone writes about: Deathly Mint. I ...

Hello! I lovelovelovelove LOVE this! The rhyme and rhythms of the poem helped it flow. I also greatly appreciate the word choice you used in creating this poem. It really ...

This is insanely amazing! I especially love the part where it states that... "Yet be warned: it will be destroyed before the trees regain their blossoms. And I will relish ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this piece. I like the plot twist at the end when it talks about how all the poem is really just a dream... Well, a nightmare. ...

Hello... I love this poem! You did a great job in explaining what being brave really means. I especially like the lines: "Brave is a choice and not a trait, ...

Hello! This poem was very pleasant to read. I especially like the last line: "Lady of love, The olive branch dove." The rhyming helped make the piece have a nice ...

Hey Joy! Wow. I love this poem. I especially love the last part when you say: "Love me unconditionally, And I will never let you go." I must ask...How do ...