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Hey! Welcome to YWS . This is Theia here for a review. Amazing work , I have to say . In a really long time , I haven't read anything ...

Hi, Their here for a review. First thing-THIS IS AMAZING. I have never read a similar piece. Personally, I am horrible at writing stories, like totally horrible. I wish to ...

Hi , Theia here. First up - this was an amazing poem. I have never, ever, EVER seen anything like this before. "I want blood" , it is really unique. ...

Hey ! First of all congratulations on this amazing piece of yours. Personally, I am an astrophilic so obviously my love for the stars attracted me towards the title , ...

This is a very powerful work and it is presents something like a story but I don't think it can be considered a balled. The poem is great and the ...

Hey Bellarke .... Here for a review(after a long time)and I have to say it is a very sweet poem.T he best thing is that I can totally feel it ...

Hey Caryst here for a review. Poetry , the title at once attracted me ,as if calling out to read the poem.I think this is a great poem.Word choice is ...

Hey Blueafrica , it is Theia here for a review. "They told me "they never told me ,the name struck me pretty hard.The poem is AWESOME,you have done an amazing ...

Hey fraey,here for review. This is a great poem and meaning of the poem is amazing.The structure is pretty good.The first 2 lines "These rainbows speak my name, But rarely ...

Hey there! Nice work.I couldn't even imagine that someone would write something like this about a bee.The way you have presented the poem is also impressive,yellow and black. The second ...

Hey Althea,here for a review. Nice poem ,I got to say,the theme you choose to publicise how life is,it is absolutely perfect,"To stop would be permanent " amazing. One thing ...

Self protection,got to say, it's a good one.The description you gave is pretty catchy and the starting and ending lines just give a very nice effect. I think you could ...

Hey! Here for a review.A nice poem and nice work with rhyme scheme.I think you could change the punctuation, so many comas make it feel a little one line there ...

Hi manilla,here for a review. The poem ,as it is a good one.The imagery that the poem provides is subtle and concise.The structure in which the poem has been written ...

Hi silented1, An amazing work by all standards.The structure adopted is mind blowing, I never thought a poem could be written like this.Circle one is actually the the first work ...