TakeThatYouFiend

This is a very nice poem, with a lovely viewpoint, reminding me of some of the main characters is a few of my favorite novels. I also greatly approve of ...

This essay was a plesent read, despite the fact I have no intention of going to Asia. Mainly because of the humour me thinks. The one thing this lacks is ...

This a very interesting point, and, with no disregard to the poem, one I hope isn't true. Of course it is true to an extent, but who marvals more at ...

This is a vey philosophical poem here, and your points are all valid. However, given the philosophical basis, I do feel there is space for improvement, in terms of metaphors ...

This is a poem in which I am not sure this is supposed to make me happy or sad! Defiantly your Rhythm is your best strength here, it makes the ...

This is similar to one of my works! The last line here is good, as is the first, again your grammar and spelling is good, but for one point. "hoping ...

Ooh! This is not what I expected from the title and description, but is good nonetheless. It's main strength is it's message, which several potential reviewers can relate to. Also ...

This is good, and I was primaraly drawn in by the title. it has a basis of dialogue and character, both of which work well, and you have used a ...

You are great at poetry! I came here via related links from My favorite fuzzy sweater, and I am following on the strength of these 2 poems! It really is ...

This is amazing! Usually I find that when I read poems on the ypung writers society they either have rhyme and rhythm, or nice content, or good use of language, ...

This is a little creepy, and I love the last line. It must have been hard to write an accrostic with numbers, but I am glad to say it worked ...

This is just strange. With is how I like it. It is almost like a just so story, and at a guess that is what you were aiming for. I ...

I thought that older works must be sadly under reviewed, so I'll write one... This is a lovely plot idea, but it feels rushed, as if you can't wait to ...

This is great, and the description "torture for dummies" really draws the reader in. I do feel that a little more clarity would be welcome; I understood all of it ...

It seems everything I was planning on saying has already been said. I to am a whovian, and it is a wonderfully doctorish poem, but you doneed to look at ...