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Re: Make Me Like A Star
I am glad you have included the sort of labeling, particularly for the slow chorus, because it does improve it methinks. And todays recommendation is... (drumroll) I think you should ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: I am Free
Another great piece of religious lyrics! As soon as I read this I was thinking about the realise of mankind of sin through the crucifixion of Jesus. And what a ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: My One True Love
Just stumbled across your lyrics folder, wow that is extensive! Right I know songs are very repetitive, particularly the Christian genre, (at my church at least,) but this seems a ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: Five Fail-safe Ways to become a Writer – The Official Guide
*Peers over half moon spectacles* "What is the interesting work?" Hilarious!!! This is really good, I particularly liked the NIB injection! (Huzzah for the quill pen!) Another particularly funny bit ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: The Way You Say My Name
Marvelous. Some of these lines are so poetic, and others just strike as amazingly true. Another think I particularly like is the way that you point out cliches in your ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: Heartache is a spiral staircase
*applause* Huzzah! I wonder what it means... Yet another amazing poem, although methinks it could be regarded better classified as lyrics than a poem, cause it's lyrical an' all! :-) ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: Cut your Cake
A poem in a poem! (Somebody needs to write a poem about this!) On the poemlet. This was such an amazing contrast, and the equivalent of smacking somebody round the ...
Feb 26, 2014 -
Re: to know you exist
Greetings! This is now officially a review bomb! First up, I would like to say that, although I expect the letters in brackets in the first and last verses make ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Phosphenes for escape
Yousa English! Or at least spell colour with a u. :-) This was amazing, and despite the fact I can't make head nor tail of it, this is so nonsensical ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: fallen leaves have stories
This, as Typer said, is gorgeous. This sounds beautiful, and I would read it aloud if the other people in this room wouldn't look at me in a strange way ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Home is far
This was very nice, with only one thing that didn't work for me. The rhyme scheme is tripping, and while this did trip me up a bit, once I realized ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Mirage
This was brilliant, so lets see if I can write it a review while it is still review day! The rhythm/stanza breaks were great, and the helped to emphasize every ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Review Day Rhapsody
Yep, I realize this is the wrong review day, but GO BLUE! That said, I will now review your poem. The key to this poem's success is, methinks, down to ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: I am all but able to live.
Righty-ho. You are a good reviewer, yet on the wrong team! This is really very nice, and it seems a little riddle like. If it is, I certainly don't know ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: I'm a Little Writer
Huzzah! A humourous poem! My favorite genre! (Why is everyone either depressed or in love???) This is very funny, however I feel it could do with a litte reworking, in ...
Feb 23, 2014
