User avatar

TakeThatYouFiend

TakeThatYouFiend

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Make Me Like A Star

    I am glad you have included the sort of labeling, particularly for the slow chorus, because it does improve it methinks. And todays recommendation is... (drumroll) I think you should ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: I am Free

    Another great piece of religious lyrics! As soon as I read this I was thinking about the realise of mankind of sin through the crucifixion of Jesus. And what a ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: My One True Love

    Just stumbled across your lyrics folder, wow that is extensive! Right I know songs are very repetitive, particularly the Christian genre, (at my church at least,) but this seems a ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Five Fail-safe Ways to become a Writer – The Official Guide

    *Peers over half moon spectacles* "What is the interesting work?" Hilarious!!! This is really good, I particularly liked the NIB injection! (Huzzah for the quill pen!) Another particularly funny bit ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Way You Say My Name

    Marvelous. Some of these lines are so poetic, and others just strike as amazingly true. Another think I particularly like is the way that you point out cliches in your ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Literature Re: Heartache is a spiral staircase

    *applause* Huzzah! I wonder what it means... Yet another amazing poem, although methinks it could be regarded better classified as lyrics than a poem, cause it's lyrical an' all! :-) ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cut your Cake

    A poem in a poem! (Somebody needs to write a poem about this!) On the poemlet. This was such an amazing contrast, and the equivalent of smacking somebody round the ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: to know you exist

    Greetings! This is now officially a review bomb! First up, I would like to say that, although I expect the letters in brackets in the first and last verses make ...

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Phosphenes for escape

    Yousa English! Or at least spell colour with a u. :-) This was amazing, and despite the fact I can't make head nor tail of it, this is so nonsensical ...

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fallen leaves have stories

    This, as Typer said, is gorgeous. This sounds beautiful, and I would read it aloud if the other people in this room wouldn't look at me in a strange way ...

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    This was very nice, with only one thing that didn't work for me. The rhyme scheme is tripping, and while this did trip me up a bit, once I realized ...

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Supernatural Re: Mirage

    This was brilliant, so lets see if I can write it a review while it is still review day! The rhythm/stanza breaks were great, and the helped to emphasize every ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Review Re: Review Day Rhapsody

    Yep, I realize this is the wrong review day, but GO BLUE! That said, I will now review your poem. The key to this poem's success is, methinks, down to ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I am all but able to live.

    Righty-ho. You are a good reviewer, yet on the wrong team!  This is really very nice, and it seems a little riddle like. If it is, I certainly don't know ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: I'm a Little Writer

    Huzzah! A humourous poem! My favorite genre! (Why is everyone either depressed or in love???) This is very funny, however I feel it could do with a litte reworking, in ...

    Feb 23, 2014


Let the wild rumpus start!
— Maurice Sendak