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ABBBBBBY! Julia here for a short review. This was an awesome end to a really creepy and cool story! I have a few nitpicks: "As their dance carried on, the ...

Hello, lovely Julia is here to review for uuuuuu. I thought this was great overall, but I have a few nitpicks: GRAMMAR: "bare body.There was also" You need a space ...

Hello, icannothearthings here for a short review! This is like MY FAVORITE THING EVER! This is so funny! Still, I have a few small nitpicks for you to take care ...

Hello, icannothearthings here for a review! This was an . . . interesting piece. I had a few nitpicks and some issues with the piece itself, but we’ll start with ...

Hello, icannothearthings here for a short review! I thought this was a really beautiful poem, but I'll review this by stanza. "You inspired me. You told me that I could. ...

Um, well, this seemed like it would be a great poem, but instead, there is nothing there. I really want to review this because it seems so interesting, well-written, and ...

Well, this was an interesting piece. I guess. This is what I would expect from the "other" section. ANYWAYS . . . "Stop hearing the voices of others." Eh, I ...

This is really cool and very interesting for an "other" piece. I might categorize this as a short story because it works like flash fiction. Just to say ;) Anyways, ...

HAPPY REVIEW DAY! This was a really cool poem, and just to say, I loved your choice to out the little crescent moon "emoji" at the beginning. ☽, I mean ...

This is really cool, but just to say, it's a poem. Not a short story . . . "But I am beyond healing" This line just sounds too needy. A ...

A very happy review day to start :) I thought this poem was really interesting. I'll elaborate on 2 lines each stanza: "and the texture is rough and calluses form" ...

This was a really cool and interesting poem! I took 2 lines from each stanza to elaborate: "and the summer heat was high." I don't think the word "high" really ...

Hello, icannothearthings for a short review. This was really awesome! I don't know if it's good that I'm reviewing this or not, because I've never reviewed flash fiction before. Now ...

From your description, I'm guessing this is for NaPoWrMo. Is it? Well, no matter what, I really enjoyed this poem. I'm gonna review stanza by stanza. "Do I seem faithless ...

Ooooooooooooh, this was cool. I really liked. Slowly, but surely, and thanks to YWS, I'm starting to like poetry. I liked this! "Stuccoed walls with loud interjections-" Just to say, ...