Swiftfur

This was a good story! Although you need a little work on grammar, spelling, and punctuation, It has a good flow, and a catchy title. This one part caught me ...

This poem is beautiful. Don't get me wrong, though! I've seen a lot of great poems, but this one stands out. Like Elizabeth said, you used colors to dramatize your ...

Wow. I cannot fathom how a bee inspired this. Anyway, review. No grammatical errors. Perfect spelling and punctuation. Good descriptive and figurative language. Nice flow of words. All-in-all, a fine ...

Hello there! Swiftfur here to review for you. You certainly know your English! I saw no mistakes is grammar, punctuation, or spelling! This piece had excellent descriptive words, figurative language, ...

Hello there, Swiftfur here, reporting for duty. I liked this poem very much, it's very, well, (That was horrible, let me restart.) The beginning is the part that really hooks ...

I loved this poem, through and through. No grammar mistakes, good flow, catches your attention from the first word. These are all the markings of a good poem. You passed ...

Well, this is one heck of a story! I enjoyed reading it very much, but there are some major things missing. 1: Punctuation. I noticed you don't put periods before ...

I loved this short story. It was so, how can I say, eerie, in a way, even a bit spooky. Some people have had things happen to them where friends ...

Edgar Alen Poe if such a good writer. Although this poem is not yours, I want to review something, so I'll review it for Edgar. So, in the beginning, you ...

This song is beautiful. The words flow together to create something...magical. It's almost like your in the fairytale, and you can see them, know what I mean? This song is ...

Hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooly crow. Never in my short life have I EVER seen such writing. The last paragraph is especially good; it contains lots of information about, 'what's her face's' mom. It's ...

Hello there! As I was reading, I noticed a little error near the end. "Oh, how I love the sound of you quiet purrs that can only come from you." ...

Hello there! While I was reading, I noticed some spelling errors. "fallowed", should be, "followed". Also, you used "hide" when you should have used, "hidden". I also noticed this sentence ...

Well! This is a great story, but i noticed the word, sobbed, and, sobbing, used too much. It's sometimes a good idea to juice up your story with different and ...

We! This is a great story, but i noticed the word, sobbed, and, sobbing, too much. It's sometimes a good idea to juice up your story with different and new ...