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Re: we are lost at sea, lost in our own minds
Hi dear, it's sweta here and I hope you are doing great. First of all, I love the title of the poem and the poem is great... I liked how ...
Mar 17, 2021 -
Re: Like A Rose
Hey @eaglefly.. This is beautiful... It is simple and well written. And it's like that motivation poem we all need in our life when we are about to give up. ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Hybrid Chapter 1( edited )
hii @anma, welcome to yws.. the story is good but too slow.the characters like sarah's mother and missy you need to tell more about them. it felt like i am ...
Mar 25, 2019 -
Re: The Magical Musician---5
Hii @eros, hope you are fine... Here, we got to know more about Karan. He is a drug addict and tries to be a cold-hearted man while he is not. ...
Mar 18, 2019 -
Re: Abnormals (Part 1)
hii jade, sweta here. welcome to YWS. I hope you like it here. The tile of the story is really good And the story is amazing too. Well, you should ...
Mar 7, 2019 -
Re: Broken Snow Globe
Hii @bellarke, hope you are doing fine.. I liked the poem. The title and the poem are going really well.. And the way you have described it great work..the overall ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: The Magical Musician---2
Hey, good afternoon @eros, have a amazing day.... Good work. Characters are well developed. You can show more reaction when abba come back home because he is already died and ...
Feb 24, 2019 -
Re: Lies
Hii @bellarke, sweta here....i hope you are fine and have a good day too.... I liked it and it is so true. It fit the reality of how we ignored ...
Feb 22, 2019 -
Re: The Magical Musician---1
Hiii @eros, welcome back......happy to see you again. Sweta here with my opinion on this wonderful part... This is a great start. I likee the story and the storyline. The ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: Mujhse Bada Ek Paap Hua- Girl
Hey sweta here, with my opinion.... I liked your poem but it is really disappointing for me,at least. I really hate when a girl thinks so. There are things which ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: In The Singularity - Part 1: Pwnage - Chapter 1.1
Hey dear, how are you doing?? Have a great day...sweta here to review your work... Feel free to disregard I like the plot. The story is really good. There is ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: Past Hope chp. 5
Hii @junel, sweta here to review your work..hope you are doing fine... I like the title name and it made me look into your story. It is really good and ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: It can take a long time to realize you're immortal.
Hiii dear, hope you are doing fine... Sweta here with my opinion on your work... I liked your story. Its great it kept me hooked up till the end. The ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Na tere liye, na mere liye
Hii nishthabawa2896, hope you are doing fine... Sweta here... It's a beautiful poem but a beautiful meaning... You did a great work..the beginning and the ending is amazing... I like ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: A realization
Hii @FireSpyGirl, sweta here.... How are you doing?? I hope you are fine.... I like the title of your poem and I like your poem too i like the lines ...
Dec 29, 2018