SushiSashimi333

Wow, this story kept my eyes glued to the screen 'til the every end. This was realistic and the way that Demi viewed the world was understandable. She is a ...

Wow, I think that you really did what you wanted to, expressing how you see everything. I felt like I was you and like I had known you for quite ...

I really liked this, the last part was very touching. Your message was strong. There really isn't anything else to say besides this was amazing. The sayings were also nice, ...

I really like how you ended this poem with a question. It really makes the reader think about everything that you just wrote. This really sends a strong message in ...

Wow, I really liked all the comparisons used throughout this poem. And really the whole poem was just a big metaphor or symbol. The fact that you were able to ...

There really wasn't too much to this piece, mean it's interesting, but kinda typical. Like how you ended with "it all started with my history test." I think there might ...

Despite the many colored capsules there is a sad note to this. I imagine the pills and what this person must go through, hope seeming so far away. This was ...

I like how you started this with a question, makes the reader start off with thought. I also liked the way you described Cupid's arrow as a stab instead of ...

I think that this was written should I say poetically? It had that nice flow to it that only poems have. I do wish that there was a little more ...

Whoa, the fact that this is about a clock as it goes through time, kinda like idk, a paradox? I never thought how a clock might feel doing its job, ...

This is definitely what some girls think when in love. The part with the dancing and falling, that was a clever way to bring that romantic phrase into the poem. ...

Love from a completely different point of view, and it's a rose. Like it very much. The way it shows the rose as the love progresses then fails. I really ...

Interesting essay, I feel that most teens should read this. I know many people who would benefit from reading this (if they even understood). It would also be good for ...

I am very glad that my bones are not liquefied, I would be dead, to state the obvious. This was a little confusing and I didn't really see the irony, ...

To be honest this is a very sweet piece. The other thing is that this is really mushy, grammatically I think it was fine. I can tell that a lot ...