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Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter One
Hello! I don't think we've met before, but I'm Sushi! Anyways, I'll just be doing a little review for you since it's review day (even though I'm not on a ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]
So this is my first review in a while, I'll do my best to be thorough but not super nitpicky! ^_^ Okay, so your main character is non binary, as ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: Proportion.
Hey Shauzer, sorry it took me so long to get to you. Midterms are just awful XD But I'm here now. First off, something you need to go back and ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: The Inch (Rewritten) - Chapter 1
Hi! Sushi here :D I haven't been on this site for a while, so you might not know me. Anyways, I'm going to be as detailed as possible to make ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 2
Okay! Now I'm starting to see who Akia is! I guess I just didn't realize that she was the girl who had tackled the guy from before. Now I understand ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: Game On Level 0.1
Hello! Sushi here for a review ^^ I hope you find it helpful and non repetitive... but considering I haven't read the previous reviews.... Okay, first off I'll start with ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 1
And here I am, as promised! I can already tell from the first sentence that this is probably going to be my favorite character. The awesome female that's just... I ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 2
Hello! Sushi here again for a review ^^ Sorry it took me so long to get here, but I still remember what happened in chapter one :D I see what ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 1
Hello! It's been a while since I've done a review, hopefully I can do this right and make it helpful ^^ First off, what I noticed throughout the entire first ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Shadowdale - Final Chapter Snippet
Okay, so I did say I would make a review! I'm trying to stay on top of things, obviously fate won't allow it u.u Neither will my strange sleep pattern ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: True Love's Kiss~A retelling of Beauty and the Beast
Okay, Sushi here for a review, sadly I can't say it will be quick because I tend to ramble XD I hope this will help you though ^^ First off ...
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Triden
Well, this if fantasy (which I love), it was in the green room, and it's nice and short so I thought it would be perfect if I reviewed this. ^^ ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Echolocation Chapter two; Making Sense of it All
So because this is short I thought why not just review this now! Plus, if I put this off it will never get done. There's still this chapter that I ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Echolocation Chapter one; Discovery
So I saw you said this was meant to be fuzzy, but honestly, I feel you could make it a bit fuzzier XD I know you probably weren't expecting someone ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 2
Okay! Here for another review, and I'll make sure to mention the part in which you want reviewed. (I should write that in my stories too. Good idea) Flow: This ...
May 10, 2014
