Sujana

Not sure if this is a celebration of mental illness or the girl from Melanie Martinezs' "Mad Hatter" making a very elaborate but at the same time very sad poem. ...

Overall? Splendid idea with a nearly wonderful execution. I loved the last line, the strained relationship between the two, and the concept that even after the end of a kidnapping ...

Happy Review Day. As I read this over, I'm not sure if you're going for the broken protagonist or the recovering protagonist. There's little transition between the two, and I ...

This was a reasonably good story about abusive relationships and finding oneself after the cataclysmic end of one. I feel for this protagonist, surely, because I've witnessed a good number ...

JESUS EFFING CHRIST MAN I THOUGHT HE ROBBED A BANK OR SOMETHING AHH I HATE YOU AUTHOR THAT WAS WAY TOO DRAMATIC FOR ANYTHING Now that we've got that covered, ...

Ooh, interesting. Some personal reading preferences I found to be a little disturbing during the reading: -"I, believing if I took my sight off of those eyes they’d do something, ...

Well, I came to a horrendously sad thing after the new year. But anyway, I didn't come here to talk about how sad you made me after this short story/poem/thing ...

I concur with Ronald. Reading this feels like reading a written version of a really good movie. But I can be down for that. The possibilities are endless in this ...

This was actually really, really good. The concept itself was really simple, but for some reason worked so well with the setting. Not only is the boy/girl in question afraid ...

If I'm honest, I didn't like this. I liked the message, but with the style of an entire paragraph written for one story, little to no capitalization and some blatant ...

This was a little bit of a mess for me. It wasn't anything horrible, but it wasn't entirely spectacular, either. I don't know, I couldn't see the concept that justified ...

First, various nitpicks and problems I found: -"He grabbed the trey and went upstairs, eager to turn his thoughts into actions." Tray. -I still don't understand how Spencer reasoned saving ...

For it's length, I did like this work more than I thought I would. I mean, internal struggle stories are always great, and they don't require much dialogue--just a conflict ...

Reading through this was a little like reading something typed by an undeniably good writer on a phone--the descriptions, the characters and the scene feel magnificent, but it's somehow hindered ...

...What just happened? Okay, before I start giving compliments, the nitpicks/various problems: -The development seemed to be much too short. I mean, I understand that in the beginning she was ...