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Re: Rat Race
How can I make the theme I'm presenting clearer? Could you also clarify on what you mean by other poetic tools (I did the stanzas thingy just now :) ) ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: i am not the man
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May 10, 2016
Hey. I'd like to believe that this has meaning but I cant see it. That would be ok, but it leaves me (and possibly others) confused and wanting more. I ... -
Re: we matter
Subjects been gone over more times than I can count but I still think this is unique. Good job.
May 10, 2016 -
Re: The Last Archon CH1: Remembering Shadows
Thank you! This means more than you know. I'll get to it right away! (Morn's supposed to be like a god so that's why he can take out so many ...
May 6, 2016 -
Re: On Gender, Growing Up, and The Meaning Of Life
Well...despite all the things said above, all your views and opinions, which I do value, I can only say one thing. Hi
May 3, 2016 -
Re: It hurts, Ryu
sudden deja vu
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: Chocolate
Nothing. Dont worry about it. Just me being petty. Great work %uD83D%uDC4D
Mar 16, 2016 -
Re: Chocolate
Yeah. Sure. Ok.
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Hold On
Thanks :D
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: Hold On
Thanks. The changes have been made.
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: Ryu, a poem for you
This is to long. I do like what you say and it is definitely worth making this poem long enough to say it but it is redundant and it there ...
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: Companion
You write with great language. However, something you have to watch out for is putting to many ideas into one paragraph which is what you did here. It makes the ...
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.07)
disregard this
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Exponential fat increase
Mhmm
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: an unwillingness to part
Stop being unbelievably good at poetry.
Feb 22, 2016