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I LOVE... THIS. My only gripe is that you seemed to have a line-by-line thing going on, with either two lines "I want ______, I don't want ______" or four ...

I like how the poem is simple and it almost sounds happy or playful "I chose to play and laugh" but it takes a darker turn as you go on. ...

Alrighty! I can see that there are a lot of mixed feelings in this poem. It almost seems like something is wrong inside the narrator's heart: they love the person ...

Oh my -- wow. I had some initial criticism as I read through the poem but the ending certainly made up for it. The idea behind the poem is absolutely ...

Alright, so: I loved the formatting on this one, the lil dots are unique: I haven't seen it done this way before though I wouldn't be surprised if its been ...

Right off the bat, I like the formatting. The title, un-capitalized and with punctuation, is not only aesthetically pleasing but also matches the format of the story -- short and ...

I like this poem, very funny! I feel like the last line was kind of short, so maybe "But that? That is okay." would have been better to kind of ...

Oh my god this is adorable!! I feel like I could see this in as a poem people would discuss in a 5th grade grammar/English class. Something about it really ...

Whoah. This literally is exactly how I feel. Like, to a Tee. Its crazy, I am finding so many poems that explain my situation EXACTLY. I found that there were ...

Oh my god. That last line really hits me. But I really hope that through writing this, you are able to realize that there is hope. If you have lost ...

This is a beautifully written poem. It's very calming to read. The poem has a great rhythm to it, but in my opinion this part didn't have the same rhythm ...

Oh my god. What an heartbreaking poem. An irresponsible mother never remembers her daughter's birthday, but I feel that the metaphor of Birthday goes deeper than that. it represents the ...

Wow. I think this is incredible, Bhavya. There are mistakes here and there; I'm assuming English may not be your first language? In that case though it is completely fine ...

OH WOW. I love this idea! I almost thought the same thing when the coronavirus started spreading through China. I sensed that it was going to reach global and I ...

I am intrigued in the way you formatted this poem! The capitalized words... it's not something I see often. It adds such a rhythm to your poem. And the intensity ...